Making Love

Forethought and foreplay are sometimes more important than the play

Whispering in your ear
tales of sweet ecstasy
as your body melts into my arms
and becomes one with mine.

I tenderly lay
my lips on your neck
and let my tongue
gently run the length
of your body

I breathe in your passion
I taste your ecstasy
I want your body
your mind
your love

I need your soul

I slowly,
cautiously
remove your clothes
and step back
to take in
your full beauty

I lift you
and hold you
tenderly in my arms

I carry you
to my bed
and lay you there
on the petals
of a thousand roses

Reviews

[Corset]

Absolutely :P Women actually need a few days of "working up" mentally, just ask Dr Phil, he says If he wants sex on wed, he starts on monday, lol...I don't think it's that drastic, but a couple hours advance playful nuzzling should get the motor running just right :) very sensual, well delivered, not too crass or overly chaste either. nice :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

what an imagination
=]

[quinfinn]

i find that subtlety is much more sensual than erotica in some cases..and in this case it is absolutely smoldering...very sweet, very hot...but without getting too sticky (if you know what i mean) lovely! if i were grading this it would get an A+

[Jordan A. Wilson]

sensual without being nasty. nice job.

[Laura Maidah]

tenderly lay
my lips on your neck

[w]

bring it on sweetheart

[Kuhr Gred]

wow.. you illustrate here about your most loved one.. :) isn't? very good poem.. KEEP IT UP
- Kuhr Gred

[That_Girl]

'Foreplay' is what makes the 'play' so satisfying. Great poem. :)