Lost Little Girl

All I am ,
is a wave in the sea ,
with no land in sight .

Alone ,
Lost ,
young .

So here it comes ,
the tsunami ,
of fear ,
loss ,
pain ,
regret .

Ocean made up of my tears ,
that never stop falling ,
the pain ,
the never stops hurting .

All I really am ,
Is a hurt young child ,
broken from the inside out ,
scars on my body ,
are nothing to the ones on my soul .

I'm a lost little girl ,
I need you to find me ,
to help me to grow ,
to help me mature .

I'm sorry ,
But I guess I'll be lost forever ,
a child forever ,
never grow old ,
never be found . . .

Reviews

[Kate Hunter]

this is an abyss of depression, dearest. I wish I could ebb the pain, but I don't have any idea how to start.

[Art]

nice work...the comparisons of tears and the ocean make the wholeness of emotions and no land in sight exemplifies that feeling of being lost more than the actual word...a child forever, I am sure many people wish they could stay this way, unfortunately we sooner or later find the realities of life and there is where we call for help...

[BrynnaW.]

I can feel the persons pain and want. Very good. Sadly, some children are abandoned.... Now, your poem was beautiful in the sad sort of way. I loved it! Keep writing!

[Forest Green]

Your poem certainly touches on hopelessness and its attempt to prevent a renewal of faith in one's self and in their future happiness. One has to believe that somewhere there will be a someone who will meet the need for companionship....as it's much to soon to yield to despair.

[Emily B]

all we really are . . . i guess