Violet Field

 

As I walk down the road with you, I take the air and breathe it in, my heart that beats perfectly when you are near me.

Am I the one to lift you up to the vast field of purple violets, where our silent minds dance together in the privacy of the magical nights?

Give me the honour of looking into your eyes and entering your heart, where the way leads to your soul that had been connected with mine, since the beginning of our lives.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ooooooo .. she asks a lot me thinks! ... that kind of trust and being vulnerable are especially difficult for most men in particular .. women too .. but not so much .. i love the pic .. and the purple of your prose .. it makes a strong connection for me
E.

[Silmara McGarry]

True!
Much appreciated dear🙏🏻

[Tom]

Puuplish overide, compise, 'tis the colour, conflate, it was always meant to be 🥰

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhhh thanks indeed dear 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Beautiful thoughts and how could anyone resist that generous offer? I am drawn to all shades of purple and violets have a special significance for me. Apart from the scent of Devon violets which I remember as a child, Violet was the main character in a book called On Angel's wings. It is the first book that I can truly remember. Your poem is about love and you took me on a nostalgia trip. That was love filled too. Thank you Sil.

Chris

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey Chris :-) One of my first poems this one. Purple is one of my favourite colours also...something spiritual about it I think.
Ohhh... Ange'ls wings, I love the title, I should read it!
I am glad it did dear
Thank you so much for reading and your lovely words.
Have a perfect weekend!!!
Hugs,
Sil
:-)))

[Fran Marie]

Love purple ..something very magical and spiritual about it..a lovely poem with tender emotions expressed so poetically..nice work..

[Silmara McGarry]

I am so glad, because I love it also, it is a spiritual healing colour.. I believe. Thanks indeed for reading and your wonderful words, Fran ;-)

Enjoy your weekend, dear :-)

[wordman]

a beautiful love poem,great image

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you indeed :-)

[An owl on the moon]

The imagery here is stunning, the violet fields a passageway to the deeper places, the magic places. This is a wondrous longing cry of the soul for that golden thread that weaves two souls into one. Wondrous!

[Silmara McGarry]

Yes...the magic places!
Thanks indeed for your superb and so well put review.
Have a great weekend!
:-)
Sil

[LylaCrystal]

I love purple and this poem made me love it much more than before. :) Subtle feelings expressed theough the image of the purple field. Great job

[Silmara McGarry]

I am so glad the wonderful purple colour and subtle feelings of the words uplifted you. Thank so very much dear.

All best,

:-)
Sil

[Josie E. Cook M. A.]

This conveys a time shared and enjoyed...
love the picture, too.

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so much, Josie!
All best,
:-)
Sil

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I see the perfection in your words and loyalty in your heart for love. True love really seems like the two hearts are connected since the beginning of lives. Simply Awesome Poem :)

[Silmara McGarry]

First, I must apologise for missing your review.
I definitely agree with you!
Thank you ever so much for such sweet words.
:-)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

It's okay. Your welcome :)

[barleygirl]

I like the way this starts out a little bland & then amplifies as it goes along, until the ending seems to have much more of a powerful message to convey. The first couplet seems bland to me becuz some of the ideas are a little predictable: ""walk down the road" . . . "breathe in the air" . . . "heart beats perfectly with you." This could be spiced up a bit by SHOWING us what the road looks like or what the air smells like or what the heartbeats feels like . . . details make a message more original & memorable. The final paragraph/stanza builds into a crescendo of hope & optimism.

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Really appreciated ;-)