Sarcastic Oblivion

Sarcastic oblivion is a caustic reptilian

Is a cause for a million trillion billion villains to shed their skin chillingly...

Willingly still

A fed lamb on ah-grill...

Still as dams filled

A still of damnable swill...

A pill and refill the drill that will build flammable hills

With will of steel...

Tamable fields steal gullible frame from the heels of seals

Healed like veal in halls of fame...

Flames and rain

Eels in pain...

Lame-brained canes and a deal with Cain to cradle Abel

Disabled enabled to go down in fables heard round the stables...

Tables round and able to saddle cables

Ladles making halos...

A noble payload

Reviews

[Tom Aubin]

The words, the ambiance, the rhythm... I liked everything.
It seemed to me (at least in my mind as I read it) that the tone changed right before reading "Flames and rain", as if day turned into night and a strange deep and calm voice whispered the rest of the poem in my ears.
I loved it!

[Chase Dylan]

You would be pretty correct in that tone change, Tom, and thank you so much for appreciating and time taken to visit... It means the world

[Tom Aubin]

It was definitely worth it so you're most certainly welcome. I'm looking forward to read more of your writing in the future.

[Chase Dylan]

Aye, ditto, friend... Thanks you again, a pleasure

[RolandDee]

Gee wilickers boys and girls… I wonder why this vacuous SJW d********g ran away with his tail between his legs? I wonder why that "social writing site" turned out to be a fake effort abandoned almost immediately by it's own creator?

Eggregious hypocritical virtue signaling bully games never work out in the long run. I'm glad you realized how embarrassing your actions were/are. Maybe if you had some substance behind your populist rage you'd be worth something... but alas... you turned out to truly be intellectually vacuous.

And I'm not even going to get into the plagiarism accusations against you. (which is probably the real reason you ran away like the coward you truly are.)

If you play stupid games, you win stupid prizes. Enjoy your shame. I hope you learned something.


Regards,

-- you know who this is... I never blocked you, ya coward. Despite all of your bullshit... you are still welcome to say whatever you want to me publicly or privately. And if you had any balls, personal integrity or honor you wouldn't have had to scurry away like you did. We could of talked like men and I would have been more than happy to debate you. You chose to act like an SJW bully. You did this to yourself...

(also, stop plagiarizing other peoples work... if your that intellectually bankrupt you have to resort to that s**t... maybe writing just isn't for you)

I look forward to your further cowardly silence.

[Joey Nizz]

A relaxing calming flow in your words in this piece, I like the words you have written to create each line, your rhythmic play on words were perfect.

Thanks for sharing an other great work.

[Chase Dylan]

Thanks so much for reading, Joey, and I hope the words brought a smidge of the usual inspiration I get when reading your stuff.

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome :)
And yeah it kinda did, It made me write something yesterday when I was feeling with no inspiration to write, Im gonna share it with you once I post it :)

[Chase Dylan]

Oh, man... Hell yeah... That is music to my ears... Please do...!

[Joey Nizz]

Well do man thanks ^^

[Vic]

nice flow between like sounding words to new ones. the vowel sounds pop

[Chase Dylan]

I appreciate it, Vic... Thanks

[A little flame]

This piece gives me a very eery, chilling feeling. Especially, "Lame-brained canes and a deal with Cain to cradle Able"....
As usual it is well written and very clever. I don't even know what it means yet somehow the words turn my stomach and leave me feeling somewhat anxious.

[Chase Dylan]

Spot-on with the emotions, Flame... I meant for those feelings to creep in, and it seems I succeeded... Thanks so much for the read

[Stephanie M]

Cool use of word combinations.

[Chase Dylan]

Thank you, Stephanie... It felt cool to the tongue and mind to write...

[Raven Moonchild]

Dude, this is amazing and mind blowing!!! :D Thank you for sharing your amazing talent with us meager peasants. (throws horns)

[Chase Dylan]

Dude, thanks...! Thanks for appreciating, and stay metal...

[Raven Moonchild]

METAL RULES ALL!!!!! (THROWS HORNS)

[wordman]

man has raped our wildlife for centuries,it`s all in the name of greed

[Chase Dylan]

Aye, that they do, Man of Words... Thanks so much for the insight

[Great Aunt Astri]

I love the play with words, all the alliteration (or is it assonance?) and interesting word combinations. I think you had fun writing this. I had fun reading it! Thank you.

[Chase Dylan]

I never know the difference between the fancy terms... I am a bit simple for that, hah... I had a ball writing this, thank you for the insight, and glad you enjoyed yourself...

[Great Aunt Astri]

keep it up. [:

[aj milton]

The rhythm and flow is wonderful. Some of the images fascinating and some of your word combinations just surreal. The synapses in my brain were wondered which way to fire!

[Chase Dylan]

Hah, thank you, Milton... Let us hope they found a good direction eventually...

[Zoya]

you seem insane like your poetry... insanely creative. Of course, again, I understood nothing here. The insertion of rhyming words here and there makes it interesting and fast-paced to read.
"A pill and refill the drill that will build flammable hills"- a 'kill'-er line lol.
A crazy poem to read, loved it.

[Chase Dylan]

Insane, eh? Heh... Again, I understand not much more than you... Crazy, though, it is indeed... Loved that line as well... Thanks for the review, Zoe

[Zoya]

My pleasure

[Carol Cashes]

"...Disabled enabled to go down in fables heard round the stables..."

Tall tales told by unlikely wanna-be's 'round the fire barrel?

I love your flow and I usually read out loud for the full effect. This is again, kinda mind-blowin' to this neophyte. *bowing low - droning monotone* "I'm not worthy...I'm not...

[Chase Dylan]

Haha... From what I see of your writing and reviews... You seem more than worthy... I appreciate the continued support... Thanks very much