Cut Me Deep

I tap into you

to tap in to me.

Breath out then breath out.

I forget to take a moment to let you in.

That's just the way my breathing

flows.

Can't you see?

Just my cup of tea.

Enter my soul.

You cut me deep.

The deeds of your heart's

teeth has left me a

mouthful of cavities.

Tummy growling,

Have you had enough to eat?

Haven't you had enough of me?

Have you had me,

you wouldn't need

Me.

Finaly,

Love

Me.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

so dark...so hurt and crying out ..damn! powerful poem my friend ... the teeth of the heart is what really grabs me ...so vivid and dynamic ..sheesh ... your title reminds me of "cutters" who deal with pain in just such a way ... so so heart wrenching :(
E.

[sinNsincerity]

That's beautiful E.N.

[Suay Galaxy]

I love this ! i love the feeling i get inside reading it a nice dark place in my mind comes out

[Roch Ketchum]

Dark and beautiful. Just perfect!

[charmel]

Sometimes, we love someone so much, so much that we even do everything for them. We only think of them, care for them. we give our hearts to them but at the end of the story, we will just end up brokenhearted.

[Hebe]

Very emotional, the pain just jumping off the page! I loved the connections you made to breathing... sucking the life out of you! Brilliant work!

[Skyla]

Wow, sad and deep. thank you for sharing this with me.

[TragicEndings]

love this line -
The deeds of your heart's
teeth has left me a
mouthful of cavities.

[sinNsincerity]

I'm glad that you did Ms. Tragic.

[Coyote Poetry]

Gentle, wonderful and powerful words shared my friend. I had to read again. The words sweet, worthwhile and a pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[sinNsincerity]

Always a pleasure to hear from you my friend.
Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure my friend and you are welcome.

[¿]

Each time I'm elated reading your poems! From conveying meanings to entertainment em, feels like a matte lipstick in lips! you know absolute finishing touch! 😊

[sinNsincerity]

Punch me I bleed.
-Spiderman 2

[¿]

I was never a fan of spiderman series since I'm too scared of spiders!

[Alecia]

Because of your style , I would be just be over the moon if you read my poem on my page called "mirror"

[wordman]

seems we spend a lot of time in pain brought on by love

[sinNsincerity]

pain proves love?

[wordman]

i guess ur right

[sinNsincerity]

I could be wrong . . .

[sinNsincerity]

There’s a lot of pain that comes with feeling good

And sometimes that pain can make it hard to believe that you can feel

As good.

[wordman]

u got me sin

[sinNsincerity]

Much Love Ron!

[sinNsincerity]

"I have found the paradox, that if you love until it hurts, there can be no more hurt, only more love."

Mother Teresa

[Mari' Emeraude]

Wasn't there a song called "Hurt So Good" by John Mellancamp years ago? That's what came to mind when I read this!

[sinNsincerity]

Good, so hurt me . . .