Icy Eyes

Icy Eyes

A Chapter by Linzey
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The main male and female character state how they feel with a new character stating his own feelings in the final stanza.

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She's arrived...

I can see her in the brilliant gown

In its brilliant blues

The same colors as the tears that will be running down her cheeks

Yet, I believe she sees me too

Through the crowd of people

Her icy eyes are burning into me

Scared, yet there is a small amount of courage

It is weak though

I can overtake it easily

I will win against her

 

I can feel my heart racing

I'm finally here

It seems that everything will be as usual

But, there is an edge

There...

There's a shudder in the crowd

I don't know how I can see it, but it's there

Someone that knows this night will be different

Yet, is it going to be for me?

Or will it be for someone else

Either way a life is going to change

I fear for the worst when that happens

 

With my arms around her

I know that something's wrong

Her icy blue eyes carry a look i'm not used to seeing

Fear, like a child scared of a thunder storm

If I can only relax her

Remind her that I am with her

That I will not hurt her in any way possible

For I will hold her close at all points of this masquerade

I will wisk her away to a world just for us two

Dancing, swaying

Letting this soon to be perfect night last forever

She does not know what I want to do

To tell her of my eternal love

Tonight will be the night

Let us always have this floating love

For all I need to hear is one word



© 2011 Linzey


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Beautifully written. :) The last part is my favorite. Love how you have different points of view in one place. :))

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Linzey
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