Love At First Sight!

This HEART cry your name, and never forget the same!!

Summer Rains and Winter Heat

You are the reason I Breathe..

You are the Song in the car..

I keep singing , so far…

 

Your hands are tied,

Entangled in mine…

Streets are cold, we walk and walk

And talk these talks and talk some more….

 

You have Everything,

I cannot live without…

You are the dying man’s last words,

I cannot smile without!

 

In your arms i forget to Woe..

On your lap my Lids get close….

And your uptight Stare,

Ahh! I can see through my Hair..:)

 

You are broken Heart’s band-aid..

I am your Moth drawn to the flame…

You are my Line of Sight..

You are my LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!! J

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Very sweet and hopeful write, I'm not a fan of mixed colored fonts but it's kind of fun in this playful piece.

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

See, that's an art...my magic :P
i will make you a fan mixed colors too, soon :P
anyways, thank you for your lovely review frieda :)

[DL Shackleford]

So full of hope and joy! Fun and enjoyable read.

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Thanks for stopping by friend :)!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and hopeful poem of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Glad to see you came by...thank you coyote :)!

[Akshat♥]

Really sweet write..touched my heart :)
Keep penning !!

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Definitely.. thank you akshat :)

[Akshat♥]

you are always welcome :)

[Prritiy]

a sweet write with nice highlights, liked it.

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Thanks for the highlighted review too, prritiy :)

[Prritiy]

you are welcome :)

[Just Kim]

Awe Such a sweet wonderful write.
Awesome!

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Nice to hear from you.. thank you tabby! :)

[Shadey Jadey]

Such a beautifully expressed poem. Brings a smile to my face, Great write!

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Awww!
thankuu shady :)

[Acucena G.]

you are talented

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Thank you acucena :)

[Acucena G.]

you are welcome, i hope you visity my profile e review some of my poems

[SyberRose]

Love at first sight...usually a chemistry attraction...you put alot of effort into this with the rainbow of colors...Enjoyed...SyberRose

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

So nice to hear from you, syber...
thanks for visiting :)!

[Nayan]

Good rhythm, nice choice of colors to stress on certain words. I liked the intense emotion expressed in these lines. Keep writing :)

[quinfinn]

sounds like pure unadulterated infatuation. very sweet and joyful verse, penned with obvious relish. nicely done!

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

thanks for being critical quin :)
thanks to look in ! :)