Love At First Sight!

Love At First Sight!

A Poem by Surbhi Khandelwal
"

This HEART cry your name, and never forget the same!!

"

Summer Rains and Winter Heat

You are the reason I Breathe..

You are the Song in the car..

I keep singing , so far…

 

Your hands are tied,

Entangled in mine…

Streets are cold, we walk and walk

And talk these talks and talk some more….

 

You have Everything,

I cannot live without…

You are the dying man’s last words,

I cannot smile without!

 

In your arms i forget to Woe..

On your lap my Lids get close….

And your uptight Stare,

Ahh! I can see through my Hair..:)

 

You are broken Heart’s band-aid..

I am your Moth drawn to the flame

You are my Line of Sight..

You are my LOVE AT FIRST SIGHT!! J

© 2013 Surbhi Khandelwal


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Very sweet and hopeful write, I'm not a fan of mixed colored fonts but it's kind of fun in this playful piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Surbhi Khandelwal

11 Years Ago

See, that's an art...my magic :P
i will make you a fan mixed colors too, soon :P
anyways.. read more
So full of hope and joy! Fun and enjoyable read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Surbhi Khandelwal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by friend :)!
A beautiful and hopeful poem of love. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


Surbhi Khandelwal

11 Years Ago

Glad to see you came by...thank you coyote :)!
Really sweet write..touched my heart :)
Keep penning !!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Surbhi Khandelwal

11 Years Ago

Definitely.. thank you akshat :)
Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

you are always welcome :)
a sweet write with nice highlights, liked it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Surbhi Khandelwal

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the highlighted review too, prritiy :)
Prritiy

11 Years Ago

you are welcome :)
Awe Such a sweet wonderful write.
Awesome!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Surbhi Khandelwal

11 Years Ago

Nice to hear from you.. thank you tabby! :)
Such a beautifully expressed poem. Brings a smile to my face, Great write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Acucena G.

11 Years Ago

you are talented
Surbhi Khandelwal

11 Years Ago

Thank you acucena :)
Acucena G.

11 Years Ago

you are welcome, i hope you visity my profile e review some of my poems
Love at first sight...usually a chemistry attraction...you put alot of effort into this with the rainbow of colors...Enjoyed...SyberRose

Posted 11 Years Ago


Surbhi Khandelwal

11 Years Ago

So nice to hear from you, syber...
thanks for visiting :)!
Good rhythm, nice choice of colors to stress on certain words. I liked the intense emotion expressed in these lines. Keep writing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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sounds like pure unadulterated infatuation. very sweet and joyful verse, penned with obvious relish. nicely done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Surbhi Khandelwal

11 Years Ago

thanks for being critical quin :)
thanks to look in ! :)

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Added on April 24, 2013
Last Updated on April 24, 2013
Tags: rain, song, heart, love, woe, hair, stare, sight, lids, lap, arms

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Surbhi Khandelwal
Surbhi Khandelwal

jaipur, rajasthan, India



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