Cease II

Cease II

A Poem by Tom27

On your deathbed,
New perspective no longer matter,
Ceasing to exist,
Back into the soil your vessel goes.
As for you,
Whether to the fiery depths or the boundless horizon,
I wish you godspeed.

© 2016 Tom27


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i think maybe the bunny will go up and the Robert will go down just a hunch to much on these hands to grasp any divine. interesting pull in this prose

Posted 9 Months Ago


At that point, nothing matters anymore apart from saying goodbyes, if you are able to. Most are past that. That is a journey each one of us will have to make. I like the possibilities raised here of not knowing what comes next.

Chris

Posted 9 Months Ago


Tom,
Ah, death, the great equalizer! An interesting view of the physical end of a person. I sense also a possible continuing of what we call the soul,
T

Posted 9 Months Ago


Death is inevitable, creeping towards us all. There is no escaping. What comes to this realm must one day leave everything behind and disappear into the ever darkness, mingling with the soil. Just my thoughts. Really love your theme of writing. Kinda reflects my own style. Keep it up. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tom27

4 Years Ago

Death is. And the fact that all the money in the world is not gonna matter once you are on your deat.. read more
Blackheart

4 Years Ago

Indeed. Words to ponder upon.
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Rye
wow! nicely presented, Enjoyed both of your writes, I like this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Tom27

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much!

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