Cease II

On your deathbed,
New perspective no longer matter,
Ceasing to exist,
Back into the soil your vessel goes.
As for you,
Whether to the fiery depths or the boundless horizon,
I wish you godspeed.

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

i think maybe the bunny will go up and the Robert will go down just a hunch to much on these hands to grasp any divine. interesting pull in this prose

[Chris Shaw]

At that point, nothing matters anymore apart from saying goodbyes, if you are able to. Most are past that. That is a journey each one of us will have to make. I like the possibilities raised here of not knowing what comes next.

Chris

[kentuck14]

Tom,
Ah, death, the great equalizer! An interesting view of the physical end of a person. I sense also a possible continuing of what we call the soul,
T

[Blackheart]

Death is inevitable, creeping towards us all. There is no escaping. What comes to this realm must one day leave everything behind and disappear into the ever darkness, mingling with the soil. Just my thoughts. Really love your theme of writing. Kinda reflects my own style. Keep it up. :)

[Tom27]

Death is. And the fact that all the money in the world is not gonna matter once you are on your deathbed. And your actions before going to the afterlife shall be taken into consideration before your life flashes in your mind before you die. Thank you, keep on reading!

[Blackheart]

Indeed. Words to ponder upon.

[Rye]

wow! nicely presented, Enjoyed both of your writes, I like this.

[Tom27]

Thank you so much!