Br3@kd0wn

The images flicker, before my eyes

all the cold memories, that I despise

moments ago, I was calm- now I thrash

throwing objects across the room, landing with a crash

 

Watching him die, hanging on the edge of a well

crying myself to sleep, fighting against the hell

every wave of recall, sends another shiver

kicking the walls, falling down, aching to a quiver

 

Suddenly, it subsides, and I'm left all alone

heart rate decreases, I'm no longer hate's drone

I take a deep breath, watching the sundown

and think to myself, just another breakdown.

Reviews

[Aehr]

awesome rhyming, good concept. I totally loved this one!!!Well chosen title and, you rock! :)

[A. V. Madison]

Thanks!

[Aehr]

welcome!

[Tai Ryens]

The words 'just another' before breakdown bring shivers to my spine and smiles on my face. I applaud your clever rhymes and concept here, simply impressive.

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Awesome poem Maddie :) I love the descriptions, I can see it. Excellent :)

[Harley (arbiter)]

We all have them once in awhile, and this was a great poem! Reminds me of "breakdown" by tom petty :D but yeah good job

[Forever Hidden]

I think this is my favorite poem after cheater.

[A. V. Madison]

Wow, no one really liked "Cheater" but I'm glad you did xD

[Forever Hidden]

WHAT?! Holy cow! Those people don't know how a poem is written then.

XD