Walk with me neath falling snow

 

 

As my heart does plead your name

In amongst the shivered calls

Crystalline of flowing climb

Snow of winter’s fingers falls

 

Footprints on a path of white

Longing but to find their way

To your arms this warmth I seek

This the place they long to stay

 

Moon glow patterns calm the scene

Stars design in spiral form

Tiny crystal coated skies

Softly sway this winter storm

 

Through the branches, evergreen

Shadows dance on petals soft

In this garden of my dreams

Clouds of silver hang aloft

 

My eyes search this twilight bliss

Past the gates of iron glaze

For this perfect winter’s bloom

Here before my lonely days

 

Touch me sweet of drifting dreams

On the stems before my sight

Kiss me now, my precious flower

Hold me close this chilly night

 

Walk with me neath falling snow

Wrapped so warm my arms they hold

As our love once more is born

Out here on this evening cold

 

 

Author's Note

Trying my hand at rhyming love poetry

Reviews

[Ma'at]

the rhyming works...this turned out amazing! x

[willweb]

I like that...amazing. Thanks so very much my friend.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

flowers hugging for warmth on a snowy evening..."and I have promises to keep..."

nicely done...love the rhyme scheme...subtle as the slightly drifting snow.

[willweb]

Thanks so much Jacob. Just a few steps out of my comfort zone.

[Sami Khalil]

Romantic to the bone and souls. Excellent...:).......

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Sami for your kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).....

[Matching Socks]

I remember a time
When this man would not rhyme

Well look at him now
Go on take a bow

Your poem is so beautiful and
I can't think of a word that rhymes with that.

:D

[willweb]

It was a lot more work than I am used too, but I am so thrilled you liked this one Ana. I handed my heart the pen and said...go write something. :) Thank you so much for the beautiful review poem too. "And" huh...what about...everyone should read it I demand? :)

[Matching Socks]

Ha, good one! I was stuck on rhyming with beautiful!

[willweb]

Well...if I had my way, Ana would rhyme with beautiful. :)

[The Black Warrior]

And they say that man can't be romantic hahahaha

This is another wonderful piece Will as it is expected :D

[willweb]

Thank you so very much Suk. I am happy you liked this one.

[The Black Warrior]

YVW :D.....