An Endless Sea of Love

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My life is but a leaf atop a saltwater abyss,

on waves of firm conclusions built on reasons that I miss

I take each day as it does come in mystic falling beams

to fill the many corners of my multicolored dreams

 

Up and down in freedom form the open waters dance,

smooth the real transition to the tremors of romance

Vast the far horizons come to choose what they may show,

as I rest so peacefully while southern breezes flow

 

Timeless counted visions that do soar about my mind,

pictures painted perfect of the wisdom I might find

Stories told that hold the thoughts in words another writes,

entertainment spawned of many days and many nights

 

Now I float upon these waves, a far-off distance shore,

to hold the one of wondrous grace my heart it does adore

I shall come a calling on the eve of loving ways,

know by calculation, we have reached eternal days

 

Adrift among the numbers of the minutes that we see,

the tide shall come a waning as the moon brings you to me

Beneath these stars of evermore which brightly shine aglow,

sending forth the message of a truth you long to know

 

Lift me now my angel from this aqua blue marine,

gently for to cradle in this moment found serene

Of this golden fantasy I come to see it’s true,

this love that I’ve been waiting for lies in the heart of you

 

So here along the foaming frame, an outline of the beach,

to know time is the student of the hours that we teach

I spend my life in harmony beneath blue skies above

and share my world with you upon an endless sea of love

 

 

 

Reviews

[Writergurl]

I really enjoyed your rhyme scheme, i can feel a longing in your write. love the last stanza a lot

[willweb]

Glad you liked it; this one was fun to write.

[John Sullivan]

Love the rhyme scheme. Well done

[willweb]

Thanks so much John. I am thrilled you enjoyed this

[MomzillaNC]

So beautiful and emotive.

[willweb]

Thank you so very much

[MomzillaNC]

yvw 😎

[Theona]

It's so beautiful that I'm crying.

[willweb]

Sorry, no crying please. : ) Thank you for your kind comment

[nadia dmitri]

The rhyming scheme works so well here, the connection between the environment and the emotions is so well done, this is very well developed poem. Amazing job :)

[willweb]

Thank you so much Nadia. I am thrilled you enjoyed this one.

[Soren]

Will first of all I loved the font that you used to set the romantic scene, next the flow was smooth and soothing. Your poetry is made for romance in its style and wording and seems to rock the reader as if a lullaby. I loved the following lines:
"Timeless counted visions that do soar about my mind,
pictures painted perfect of the wisdom I might find
Stories told that hold the thoughts in words another writes,
entertainment spawned of many days and many nights"

[DIVYA]

I loved this poem dear Willweb. Beautifully rhymed and composed. Love makes the world go around. ❤

[willweb]

Thank you my friend. Sorry for the late reply, I must have missed your comment.

[Stella Armour]

"and share my world with you upon an endless sea of love"
Beautiful thoughts Will, always the romantic :)

[willweb]

Thanks so much Stella. I am happy you liked this one.

[Stella Armour]

I enjoy all of them my friend ♫