~ Paradise

~ Paradise? E.L. Elisa Laura, FreeStyle, Thoughts, Fantasy, Fiction, Love, Romance, Over? Hope? Still? Rebirth

~ Paradise

 

 

I air kissed you, from afar,

     My hand upon my mouth,

  My love, I did reach out; 

 

And well dear, to your land,

 

I lived in a dream for way too long,

      In darkened visions, of you and me;

 

      Now the day is here;

  I arrived in our Paradise,

 

The fields of hope, and trust

 

Nothing is more intense,

     To smell your skin, to touch your hair;

   And to burn with you to dust

 

 

~ Elisa Laura

 

 

Author's Note

Feel free, Enjoy! xx
Music: "Artesia - Y Ladi Wen"

Reviews

[Thaddius]

Timeless, ethereal feel. Maybe its the music but you remind me of Arwen from Lord of the Rings in your expression of that passion.

'my love, I did reach out; and well dear, to your land' captures your way of speaking so nicely, your soft maternal instinct for this lover. It makes you feel close. the 'to burn with you to dust' line, I can picture tears streaming down Arwen's face as she looks at the relic of Striders bust, condemned to immortality. This is the most powerful montage in the Award Winning Trilogy that I was raised on, so don't take that complement lightly!

Thank you so much Thaddius, for a most nice review, I feel flattered you see Arwen in this. I know the Trilogy very well, read the book more than twice :) thank you for your effort and time.

[emmajoy]

Wonderfully but gently erotic, powerful wording laid with great style from your land to another. Certain phrases curl the mind, 'I lived in a dream for way too long, ~ In darkened visions, of you and me;.. ' and beautiful music to wrap the whole.

Hi love, thank you so much for feeling this one ;-) I'm grateful to you!!!

[Coyote Poetry]

"Nothing is more intense,
To smell your skin, to touch your hair;
And to burn with you to dust"
Nice to know paradise. Thank you for the field trip in your amazing poetry.
Coyote

Thank you with whole my heart my friend, your words are treasured with me.

[Relic]

The passion is in your words and unmistakable. There is a joy that springs up when we are finally with the one we know we should belong to. Your poetry is art. Well done Elisa.

Thank you so much R. :) I appreciate you, and your words, you humble me -x-

[Relic]

You're welcome.

[Mark]

Hello, been awhile.

Wonderfully penned images abound of love, from hope, to fruition, to the blissful ending. Beautifully done!

Hey Mark! :) long time no see indeed, hope all is well with you, Thank you so much for being here, and leaving your thoughts :) good you are back!

[Rock]

You are a master of words I could get lost in your writings and never want to find my way back

Thank you so much my dear friend -x- I will come back for your stunning pieces of pure art.

[Eden Falls]

The fields... to become lost in fields, gorgeous. However, to burn to dust? Equally as tantalizing, such a transition.

Thank you so much. :)

[Jack...]

Paradise is defined by different people in different ways but always it seems to be that place that brings beauty and joy to ones heart...such as this poem does to mine. Very beautiful and a wonderful dedication to love.

Thank you so much my friend, beautiful words by you, and it is indeed defined differently by many people... I choose the more robust way, for I'm not alone there.

[A. Amos]

Laura my friend you always surprise me with your talent, this poem of your's took me back in my own memories and more.... How can you have such an effect on your reader minds, as reading your words they go back in time..... From begining till the end, I was sailing in your words so meaniful yet the brilliant message you told.... Simply loved the last line powerful

My dear friend, your presence is always a delight :) thank you for your words, to answer your question, I really don't know, I just am a person who lives very deep, in and among two worlds, I think, my past is woven always into my future, and I feel the years, I never lived... Thank you dearly sir.

[A. Amos]

You are born vanish darkness from this world with your words:) you're always welcome you know i'm one of your biggest fan.....

I'm of your work too!! it's profound, and timeless. :) so are you my friend. I'm glad you are here to enlighten the cafe, on many ways you do.

[A. Amos]

Honor and pleasure is all mine......

[Tina Louise UK]

Simply stunning...beautiful imagery :) x

Thank you so much Tia xxx :)

[PoemRodent]

Nicely done and the imagery very well... Love and Thoughts ~ Dostani

Thank you for such a kind review, Dostani, Elisa :)