HIT YOUR GOAL

Don't let your dreams fade 

Love can defeat hate 

Time is just a thief 

Steals happiness and leaves you in grief 

Live like you will die tomorrow 

So don't let yourself die in sorrows 

Forget what you have lost and learn to move on 

No one can break you as long as they know you are strong 

Learn from your mistakes 

But don't let them break you 

Just be real and pure 

So that no one can make you insecure 

Don't give a damn what other people say 

Cause you are beautiful in your own way 

Be the star of your own sky 

You are always a winner as long as you try 

Open your heart and free your soul 

And when the time comes hit your goal 

Reviews

[外人 (Gaiji..]

Great job with metrica, I guess I can say without problems, that (at least for the people I know) you're the "queen of the couplets in WC", you just write them so naturally and superbly at the same time. The flow is amazing, and it doesn't hurt AT ALL watching you finally write a "good mood type" of poem !! You make such great works when you do it !!

[nigrum homonculus]

amen. love this poem. every line in it is truthful well done

[Annie S]

Love how you end the poem with you're title. Again you are great at making creativity and feelings that are related to life . looking for more poetry and I would like to see a prose poem ( a suggestion) :)

[Southern Cross]

Nice to read an uplifting positive approach for a change. Good rhyme scheme as well as the content

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P.S lovely poem it was beautiful and spoke the truth through every line!

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And when the time comes hit your goal

ME: This will forver be my new motto :D

[Aehr]

This poem has a great message. The rhyming is gorgeous. I and many more can relate to this poem. My favourite lines were :

Live like you will die tomorrow
So don't let yourself die in sorrows

This was very well done, I'd love to read more of your work!

[Noufal Ashraf]

Good one ...,

[Wild Willow Blue]

Great message.

[MIB]

Brilliant job... I like this poem cause it remind's me of one of my favourite songs - Baz Lurmans Sunscreen... if you've not listened to it, youtube it :D great work