Like I do

Like I do

A Poem by al25

I just wanna see you bleed

I'm so good at what I do

And you know there's no way you'll be through

Cause there ain't nobody who can seduce you like I do

 

I just wanna see you cry

I'm so good at what I do

And you know there's nothing to save you from you

Cause their ain't nobody who can hurt you like I do

 

I like it when you're on the floor

Begging for more

It feels so good to see you cry

I don't know why

 

I just wanna see you hurt

I'm so good at what I do

And you know there's no one to run to

Cause their ain't nobody who does it like I do it to you

 

 

© 2010 al25


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There is a depth to this poem. A weighing down of knowing, and that's what I love about it. When poems are truthful, and relatable, they're so much better. This has definitely met those standards.

Posted 12 Years Ago


In a way this scares me, but it's also very honest and most people don't want to admit that they sometimes feel like this. I like honest poems. And i love this poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nicely written, slightly creepy tho. hm... I'll have to think about this... :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


There is a lot of strong emotion in this one. It makes me feel out of control. Kudos!

Posted 13 Years Ago


very powerful and strong. Very dark though, I never imagine someone will want someone to die and bleed and cry! Who is that? Is he or she real? Or is it a make up poem? I hope you will say the last choice, that's so dark!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Its mind is very strongly held toether yet weak at the same time. This brought up so many feelings from different views. I like this very much!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A look into the mind of a sadist, you don't have to like what you see to like this poem. Very nice read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sexy write but sort of demented too! Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Its really good. Dark but sensual

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A dark journey into the mind of sadist...well written..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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al25

College Station, TX



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