I Can Finally Be Me

I Can Finally Be Me

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:
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Just some thoughts expressed in poetry.. This was kinda my thinking process, I was thinking about how I'm not good enough, but then I realized I'm getting better. Well, I hope you enjoy (:

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I'm sorry I can't be perfect,
Extremely skinny and pretty,
That's what people want,
But it's quite hard to achieve.

I've always struggled with,
Loving myself, how I look,
So many insults and rumors,
My confidence, they took.

I was left kind of broken,
My reflection hated me,
But now the love of my life,
Is beginning to set me free.

I've gotten a little more confident.
In myself, I've begun to believe,
I've stood tall against the insults,
And now I can finally be me.

© 2013 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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Being you is being free, from any negativity.. It will always come your way, try to keep you dull and grey.. but Amanda you know you're brighter than a rainbow.. so shine your true colors girl, be vibrant, cause Amanda you add color to this darkened world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Keegan! I know I've been off for awhile, but this was a great review to come back.. read more



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I've never understood why girls and guys alike try to be extremely skinny. I don't see how someone can be more attracted to a skeleton than someone who is actually real. A very nice poem, though it has a bit less emotion than some other things of yours. Still, a good write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thanks.
You are the best!. I really liked this poem a lot! great job! 100%

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Amanda.
This is a good poem. nice job. :) stay youu. dont change for anyone!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you (:
Britt

7 Years Ago

^_^ welcome. :)
Great job!! A topic that many people can relate too. I'm sure you have/will touch many lives with this. Again, great job!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Awww, thank you(:
it shows ur talent,ur thinking about it...
very cool..
.hey..have u some more related poems related to it.......?

Posted 7 Years Ago


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krish

7 Years Ago

ok....can u till wait............?
Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

What?
krish

7 Years Ago

what......... what..........?
Another beautiful piece Amanda, written by someone very talented :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Awww, thank you, you're too sweet (:
What a beautiful poem. But I warn you that you must not rely on a person as a source of confidence. They can go as quickly as they came, and then what are you left with? Only yourself that you don't like. One must find love for themself on their own, so that it is everlasting. And as a friend I tell you the truth, that if this picture is really you, than you never need worry about being ugly.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Casanova. I know what you mean. I believe that even if he does leave though, it's not tha.. read more
this is unbelievably beautiful!
written smoothly and nicely
Well done :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Awww, hahhaa, thank you (:
Welcome! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is wonderful ! Being yourself is the best thing you can do . For you are unique and beautiful in your own way .

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you (:
Moon

7 Years Ago

No problem ! :)

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