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I Can Finally Be Me

I Can Finally Be Me

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:
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Just some thoughts expressed in poetry.. This was kinda my thinking process, I was thinking about how I'm not good enough, but then I realized I'm getting better. Well, I hope you enjoy (:

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I'm sorry I can't be perfect,
Extremely skinny and pretty,
That's what people want,
But it's quite hard to achieve.

I've always struggled with,
Loving myself, how I look,
So many insults and rumors,
My confidence, they took.

I was left kind of broken,
My reflection hated me,
But now the love of my life,
Is beginning to set me free.

I've gotten a little more confident.
In myself, I've begun to believe,
I've stood tall against the insults,
And now I can finally be me.

© 2013 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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Being you is being free, from any negativity.. It will always come your way, try to keep you dull and grey.. but Amanda you know you're brighter than a rainbow.. so shine your true colors girl, be vibrant, cause Amanda you add color to this darkened world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Keegan! I know I've been off for awhile, but this was a great review to come back.. read more



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congrats girly :) very uplifting, and glad to know you're starting to have confidence in yourself.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you Lina (:
this is so strong and couragrous, rae emotions in this are amazingly overwhelming, great one

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

I'm really glad you enjoyed it (:
Love it.^-^

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much (:
I love this because I can relate to it. I've been bullied my entire life for my looks, and it wasn't until my husband came along that I began believing I'm not ugly like so many people choose to say.
Very good read.

Posted 7 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

I'm so glad that he helped you to believe in yourself (: thanks so much!
This is a really nice poem. I mean, I love how you start off with your issue and then have that light of hope at the end of it. It is very lovely, Amanda.
Keep up the great work, and please, you're awesome, I know it :)
-Penelope H.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Awww, thank you Penelope, that's really sweet of you (: I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Euro

7 Years Ago

I enjoy all your poems, they're very nice written :)
You're welcome
Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you(: I enjoy all of yours as well, Penelope.
Dear friend and wondrous poet, you are more than good enough... You always lift us with your words... and I know your life will touch the world... (I was suicidal for years because of haters and liars...) Yes, may your life and love always be set free... So thankful for that in you.

"To be nobody but yourself in a world which is doing its best, night and day, to make you everybody else means to fight the hardest battle which any human being can fight; and never stop fighting" ~ e.e. cummings

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Awww, thank you Craig. I like that quote a lot, by the way (: thanks for sharing it with me.
An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

You're just so awesome... Hate the thought of you feeling anything less than wonderful. (:
Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Aww, haha, that's sweet of you Craig, thank you. You're a great friend too (:
Im sure your perfect in your own special way....great write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Awwww, thank you (:
I like this poem!It really expresses the true u.And its pretty brave that u admited some personal stuff but thats still cool too!!:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angelic_Dreamer

7 Years Ago

I understand and ur welcome.I luv all of ur writing dearly!!Keep it up:)
Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Awww, thank you so much, that truly means a lot to me!
Angelic_Dreamer

7 Years Ago

Ur welcome u truly deserve that comment!!!
this is something a lot of girls stuggle with... im glad you could enbrace that and takee it for what it is... thank you for sharing, yours truely Danielle (scripted)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Yeah, sadly very many do struggle with this :/ but thank you!
most of us are never good enough for our own expectations, sometines we need someone else to tell us how perfect and beautiful we are. this is an amazing and truthful write, bravo

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Yeah, that's very true, that's how I feel. Thank you (:

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