No More Heartbreak

No More Heartbreak

A Poem by Amandaaa Caroline (:
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Just.. Writing. About.. Stuff. So yeah, tell me what you think.

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I have poured my heart out,

My secrets have all been told,

I thought I was special,

You acted like I was gold.

 

That's the problem though,

It was all just an act,

My tears started streaming,

Couldn't help but react.

 

Many times over,

My heart has been broken,

My heart has been stolen,

And kept as a token.

 

I thought I was in love,

But I was completely wrong,

I feel stupid now,

Should've seen it all along.

 

It took true love, though,

To help me realize my mistake,

No longer will I fall for it,

Hopefully no more heartbreak.

© 2013 Amandaaa Caroline (:


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such a sweet and wonderfully constructed write, this is an improvement over previous writes...so much more real emotion and not as much unconnected feeling. i think you need to keep writing and hone your skills, because there is a flame of talent burning within you which should not be denied. well done, Amandaaa!!!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you!



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I think this was beautiful nice write

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
babygirl

7 Years Ago

Your welcome
Beautiful ! Amazing job Amanda !

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
Moon

7 Years Ago

You are welcome
I love this poem! The words flowed beautifully together! Keep it up! :) 100/100

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amandaaa Caroline (:

7 Years Ago

Aww, haha, thank you (:

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Amandaaa Caroline (:

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