The Savior

A poem about a girl who wants to save everybody...

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Author's Note

Some may not understand this poem... You'll have to really give it some thought!

Reviews

[Matt Evans]

I liked this poem a lot. The description of the girl was wonderful. I can understand her pain. She spent so much time helping others that she had no time to help herself, and sometimes when you enjoy helping others it's because you yourself have been through it. That's what i got from this, but I'm a poetic noob!

[Amanda J. S.]

Again, good head! ;-)

[Matt Evans]

I'm 2 for 2! :)

[Amanda J. S.]

Yep :-P

[Dr. Wood ?]

I am not a religious man...Saving people from themselves at some sacrifice to yourself is very admirable...She should be sainted...

[Amanda J. S.]

Maybe :-)

[Dr. Wood ?]

Or maybe NOT....See you got me thinking now...

[Amanda J. S.]

Well... my work is done, then! :-D

[Dr. Wood ?]

touche

[Amanda J. S.]

:-)

[Isobella Rose]

I really like this. Great job! Looking forward to more!

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you very much! ^^

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

I don't understand it... well, maybe I do but I would like to read it again after you answer this one question, "Did you really mean to use the word 'once' instead of 'ones' in lines 11, 12 and 13? That is key to my understanding and ultimate empathetical assessment of gennemgang af fransk tåbeligheder.

[Amanda J. S.]

Nope... Typo! :-)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor]

I'm a squirrel, far out on a limb, perhaps a prehistoric saber-tooth one... from the Pleistocene I see yon fair maid wielding spooky-action-at-a-distance. I will myself to evolve into a bespectacled and bearded wood gnome living in a tree in some far future time. There I invent a term for damsels with the penchant for saving everyone from everything. I call it the "Heroine Syndrome." I publish. I am famous. I retire. I die. Life goes on... :)

[Amanda J. S.]

You should add that to your writings! :-)

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor]

By your command, m'Lady! :)

[Amanda J. S.]

!^^

[Soul Fire]

I really like this!!! Excellent job! :D I understand it

[Amanda J. S.]

Great! :-)

[Amanda]

I really like this, great job :)

[Amanda J. S.]

Thank you! :-D