an echo of my soul

a threeway collaboration with ~Papaya~ and Jon Roggie

  etched 

on the parchment of my past,

are the words

I cannot erase ... 

chronicles 

           of each moment

that designed who I am;

shaping my story

               and on the pages       

the empty spaces             

  are smoothed out
with time

leaving only footprints  --

                stories half-remembered

an echo
of my soul

in moments fleeting,

regrets never forgotten --

another bit
of writing ...

etched 

on the parchment of the past,

my ink remains, 

                    though paper

is dust.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Ruth]

This is a smooth collaboration and one that speaks with one voice indeed. So wonderfully woven together :) Lingers in the soul a little this one, a delicate brush of something tangible and haunting. Brilliant piece :)

[Jon Roggie]

Speaking for myself, this felt easy. When you get to play with writers, you could expect some kind of friction. This seemed to write itself. Now, the other two may strangle me.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you very much -- friction? never. Well, maybe only the good kind:)

[Ana Papaya]

Hi Poppy, I'll throw my thanks in here too. These guys are awesome as you probably already know.read moreHi Poppy, I'll throw my thanks in here too. These guys are awesome as you probably already know.
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I am not sure if this is a correct interpretation but this is what I got from it that our past is a story. Those regrets, those moments are the ones that make our story and our story needs to be put down on paper for others to see. I got the others to see from the 'footprints" because that what footprints do let others know you were here or there. It a a beautiful poem and thank you so much to all the authors for writing this and sharing. Laters, N.

[Lyn Anderson]

Hello, thank you for reviewing and the compliment, and your considered interpretation of the poem.

[-]

Thank you for writing it. N

[Ana Papaya]

N - thank you for popping in to read this. I do appreciate it and your review is so thoughtful as always.

[-]

Your Welcome and thank you for not keep this beautiful writing to yourself and sharing. N.

[Jon Roggie]

We couldn't help it. We had to share. Thank you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, this feels like one writer...the paper turns to dust, fragments, but the ink on the soul of the writer is indelible....lasting...

we can only hope we are leaving something worthwhile behind...or will our memory just end up being figurative dust?

well done, you three...to make three voices sound as one..not an easy task.

j

[Lyn Anderson]

My partners made it easy. :)

[Ana Papaya]

Thanks Jacob, I'm saying that a lot today...
Yes, as KL said: my partners made it easy.

[Jon Roggie]

It worked. This feels so special.

[Nessly]

Really beautiful. I didn't notice there were multiple writers. Great job!

[Lyn Anderson]

Please visit the other writers' pages as well. The goal of a collaboration is always one voice. Thank you.

[Ana Papaya]

Thanks Nessly for the kind words and for reading. KL is and Jon are two of the finest people here.
There are others of course... I appreciate you coming to read this blend of thoughts into one voice.

[Nessly]

You're welcome! :)

[Jon Roggie]

As usual, I show up late. The comment I love the most is you didn't notice there were multiple writers. We seem to blend.

[Raven]

very nice, i enjoyed reading this one,keep it up

[Lyn Anderson]

at over 111 pages, not likely to stop posting soon. Thank you for stopping in.

[Ana Papaya]

Thank you Raven, for reading this. two super duper poets I am fortunate to have as friends pulled me into this.

[Jon Roggie]

Don't listen to her. She jumped into the mix.

[Einstein Noodle]

not easy for three to become one eh!? :) the ending is what really gets me ... most alluding to the pen is of power and permanence ... but you guys run true ..everything becomes dust once again ... some days there are way to many echos bouncing around me own noodle .. Norma should take the car keys away from me on those days ... ;)
memories and echos and chronicles ... great stuff in my opinion ... a pleasant journey tho closing in dust .. yes ... i believe i am ready for that :O
E.

[Lyn Anderson]

I think you have a few more years before dust. Thank you!

[Einstein Noodle]

i hope so ... my friend! ;)

[Ana Papaya]

Hi E. I'll throw my thanks in here. KL and Jon really made this one easy. I typically don't gel well with many.

[Einstein Noodle]

not always an easy thing for sure! styles and approaches can be in direct opposition yet all valid .. you guys did a great job!

[James]

Wow, this was really good, you can't tell there was more than one writer.

[Lyn Anderson]

That is the magic of the cross continental mind meld we have going. :) Thank you.

[Jon Roggie]

I have to admit this feels good. If it wasn't mentioned, I don't think anyone would have noticed more than one voice. Thank you.

[redzone]

wow, a "tri-llab"...triple the snaps for this poem... you blended well each others words and the ending hits you.. "dust".. I enjoyed reading the blended three of you - Jon, KL, Papaya...

redzone

[Lyn Anderson]

I owe the magic of the flow totally to my lady, and the resonant echoes to Jon.

[redzone]

KL, I am sure Jon played a big part in this tri-llab (I want to call it "The JKPs") no doubt... but knowing you (a ring leader, outside agitator if I ever saw one ;0p) and as Jon mentioned below you edited, then I think you are being a wee bit modest.. lol and I also see Papaya smiling in the background thinking she has escaped attention, but I know she too had a hand in getting the "tortoise" to move faster!!! Sorry Jon I couldn't resist the tease...

anyway, to all three of you, "The JKPs", I for one would always enjoy a tri-llab..

[Ana Papaya]

I'm just happy they let me play in the same sandbox red... :)
Thank you.

[redzone]

but I think you brought the shovels and little buckets didn't you.. ;0)

[Ana Papaya]

I suppose, sure. :) I bring the tools that allow them to build and just sit back and watch it happen. It's the lazy poet approach.

[redzone]

too funny, and like KL too modest!!! Jon I need your help here... lol

[Jon Roggie]

I let them do the hard work. I just ramble on for a couple of lines.

[Michael (Letters and Li..]

Wow. That was brilliant. Reading that spoke to my emotions. That title and the equivalent line is just so deep and amazing. I really loved this. You're a great writer.

[Lyn Anderson]

The line that you speak of, and the title, comes from Jon Roggie -- we collaborated together with ~Papaya~ and when it was pieced together, I edited it. The formatting and repetition are courtesy ~Papaya~ -- her very smart vision of my words that brought it all together.

[Ana Papaya]

Hi Michael, thank you. Jon deserves as much credit here as KL. While I often use repetition, that was his suggestion. Very much appreciate that you enjoyed our collective effort.

[Jon Roggie]

Don't listen to them. I just stopped by for a moment.

[Ana Papaya]

I'm very happy with how this turned out too. :)
It was fun to write with both of you guys!

[Lyn Anderson]

you guys are awesome! hugs.xo

[Ana Papaya]

Back at ya darlin'. :)
(You too Jon)

[Jon Roggie]

As usual, I show up late.

[Ana Papaya]

Lol. :)
Cuz you're a turtle and turtles are slow.

[Jon Roggie]

We just take our time, and I am a tortoise. We're the ones who hang out in the desert.

[Ana Papaya]

right, I knew that. :)