Give me no reason why

Let's talk for a while,
even if it's just not been a longtime.
Let's walk for a mile,
even if it's just for little steps to chime.
Let's create memories in a pile,
even if it's just to capture the life sublime.
Let's smile with all style,
even if it's just for a minute's time.
Let's make it all worthwhile,
even if it's just our downtime.

For once, let your thoughts fly,
from soul to heart to eye,
give me no reason why.

- AH 09/11/20

Reviews

[Beren]

I noticed that your poems help me sort out my usually scattered mind. It's like having someone on your shoulder after a long and tiring day and talking to you in a calm tone. You get it, right? I really need to read your poems more at the end of the day. It really gives peace to my soul.

[A.H.]

Thank you so much for sharing this - I'm so glad to hear that my poems have brought you comfort and calmness. Writing has always been a way for me to process thoughts and express my mind, so knowing that my writings help someone else find peace at the end of the day means a lot to me. I appreciate your kindness. Take care.

[Amber Stone]

amazing poem lines, amazing writer, catching in so lil space really quiet much, encompassing so much. what else could be said? Thank you, Mr. Hedge for the sweet remittance.

[A.H.]

Thank you Amber for being so kind with your words and encouragement. I'm very glad you found the poem to your liking. Thank you much for reading and sharing your thoughts. Appreciate it!

[X]

making life worthwhile one step at a time...lovely write Abhilash 💯

[A.H.]

Thank you for stopping by, Kira. I'm glad you liked it.

[Paul Bell]

Margie stole my thinking.
I remember when things just happened, you went out at nine in the morning and never returned. If this happened today the'd be sending out a search party. I suppose the downside of the computer age is everything is instant, the world news bombards you 24/7, probably why we're all overloaded and done in.
We need more simplicity in life.

[A.H.]

Yes,truly we need more simplicity in life. With all tech around, world has changed for better or worse.

Thank you Paul for stopping by and sharing your thoughts on this.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I think your ending lines
'For once, let your thoughts fly,
from soul to heart to eye,
give me no reason why.'
say it all in this piece filled with emotion.

[A.H.]

Thanks for stopping by for a read, John.
Appreciate your thoughts on it! :)

[barleygirl]

I remember times like these in my youth, when life wasn't so planned out, when things could happen spontaneously, when small adventures came along every day. As I watch humans turning into frustrated bickering political animals biting at each other & hiding behind required facemasks & preferring the cloak of ether camouflage . . . I really long for times that felt more trusting & open & real. Very thought-provoking poem! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[A.H.]

Life is at it's best when it's not planned out. As a matter of fact, nothing works according to a plan anyways. There's always something that you wish had happened or done differently. I like your perspectives and thoughts on this one. True, the current times we are in - world is changing and more so the people. Hope things are back to normal and for better in the world around us! Thank you Margie for reading and sharing your thoughts. Appreciate it!

[Nishi]

Wow!
It's really wonderful 😍
Great writing

[A.H.]

Thanks Nishi for reading.
Appreciate your thoughts on it! :)