By the river

By the river

A Poem by deepblue04

I've been in my room for a few hours,

it's time for me to get out!

 

Where could I go?

Library?

Computer lab?

The Student Success Center?

The Student Union Building?

The cafeteria?

 

To tell you the truth I didn't decide any of those places

The library was closed

I didn't want to surf the internet

The Student Success Center was closed

The Student Union Building was also closed

And it was around 5 pm...

I didn't feel like eating

 

However, I did remember

that there was a river in my campus

and there was a little dock that I could go sit on

 

So I brought my mp3 and my homework to work on

and I went to Starbucks for a drink

 

Sitting on the dock was one of the most peaceful places to be

for me anyways

I was able to focus

and the music help set such a good mood to work on

 

I was able to get what I wanted done

and relax by the river

seeing the ripples in the water

seeing the wildlife interact with each other

 

I was in peace

© 2012 deepblue04


Author's Note

deepblue04
an actual poem i could say that I had real thought into

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Very lovely and soothing imagery. I can picture it all and I love this poem! Nice write, friend. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


deepblue04

11 Years Ago

thank you!
Very unlucky to me, there's no river near any place I live. Thats why I really like the feeling of peace whenever I have them. and I like this poem a lot! You make me aware of how peace is needed in daily life... Nice written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


deepblue04

11 Years Ago

thank you!
wooow....its truly said poem is not something you try to make..it just happens itself when you pour your feelings out...very wonderfully written..:)..to a college going student lyk me I value peace..:P

Posted 11 Years Ago


deepblue04

11 Years Ago

thank you!

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deepblue04

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Hi! My name is Susan. I love reading and writing poetry! I will accept any friend request and will review any type of writing. I like to listen to k-pop/rock, rock. Blue is my favorite color. M.. more..

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