Lingering In Your Ears

Greater than any knowledge is the summary
of every breath you have taken
and every way you could feel, while
walking or dreaming in the light of visions
Across the mystic night sky.

Outlines curl up next to you and they shelter
Those bad things, those confusions
Melting between lips while you confess
within, of wanting and needing,
a little wild side..

With dark silhouettes dancing and mocking
The sultry taste you explore in the idea's
You'd throttle back from everyone else's eyes

You could fire those embers with a brush of your hair
Or by intensifying those vibes, you know those.
Every desire rushing through like an exhausting pleasure
A consumption guaranteed to curl toes
And leave my whispers lingering in your ears.

Reviews

[Shaquana Adams]

This is really well written. Elegant and enchanting. Nicely penned! :)

[Shaun Payton]

Thank you Shaquana.:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Your wording in this piece were spot on... your passion was tangible and reachable. Great write.

[Shaun Payton]

Why thank you very much Heroics!:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It was a pleasure.

[m.s.early]

for some reason your poems remind me of coming home. they're what i read when i'm sitting comfortably in my favorite chair. it's similar to the affect of comfort food.

however, they also make feel terribly unqualified to leave a constructive review. you have such a command of your pen and this piece in particular makes me understand things that i can't explain (which is a curse for me).

[Shaun Payton]

Thanks Xavier. A reader is never unqualified.

[Frieda P]

Enchanting read Shaun, your dark silhouettes dance to passionate music...stunning. Curling toes, oh my....

[Shaun Payton]

haha when they curl youve done it right lol Thanks very much Frieda

[Frieda P]

Yeah it's been a while, but I do recall that. ;-) hahah

[Shaun Payton]

haha Doesnt happen often

[Lydia Shutter]

Filled with passion and desire yet written with elegance. Lovely, Shaun. Lydi**

[Shaun Payton]

Thanks you kindly Lydi:)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

Exceptionally well crafted! Magical and very interesting. Bravo!

[Shaun Payton]

::) Thanks Gleb! Appreciate a very kind review:)

[Sami Khalil]

No confusions are there when I praise this magical pen upon this. A great one...:)..........

[Shaun Payton]

Thank you sir. Seems my notifications are not working at the moment. Appreciate it Sami!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure. Any time...:)....................

[Brittany Zedalis]

It comes to no surprise to me that this is another wonderful poem by you. ^-^

[Shaun Payton]

:) I approve this review!! Thanks you Brittany:)