Perfect mess.

  I wanna run inside

  my grave and die.

  I want to make it

  end.

  I don't want to see

  their faces,

  looking at me with

  hatred with every

  step I take. 

  I want to lay down

  in the bottom of the

  sea.

  I want to drown 

  in nothing and

  try to forget about

  everything you said. 

  But then I will

  wake up.

  And I will have

  to remember

  everything f*****g

  moment

  p e r f e c t l y. 

Author's Note

I wrote this last year. I found it in my notebook.

Reviews

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

Sad write, but I can relate to it. I think you did a great job on this. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Helpless]

i love finding old treasures... great job!

[Ice]

it's a little bit choppy but it's good, i know how that feels too

[Patches I'm not so new..]

I have read this and have no comment

[Fabric Pulse]

=/ I sense so much built in emotion, sadness smeared with victory.

[~Lizzy♬]

Aw girlie! I'm so sorry, just know I'm here! (If I'm right that this poem is about you.) The emotion was beautifully written through each stanza or line in the poem. Great write girlie. :)

~Lizzard~

[A.E. Surdam]

Great write. But I hope you don't think of yourself in these ways. Great imagery, and great poem. Remember to smile! :)