I'm your fool....

just some feelings that needed to be vent out.....

Your ignorance, it kills me...
Your name resounding in my head,
it stabs me...
These feelings in my heart,
they mock me...
Cos you just can't accept me,
and I just can't escape thee...
You unloved me, at your will,
just left me, dying...
My beating heart...
Now still...

Author's Note

Ode to a heart breaker...

Reviews

[poetic soul]

you unloved me!!!
my o my!!
that was so pricking!
thats how some people are....
they love and can even undo it at their whims and fancies...
too good!!!
short n crisp!
mayb a heart breaker doesnt need any more words to be wasted on them!!! ;)

:) Smile,
Krishna

[Ama May Cooper]

=[ i kno this feeling to well, love is both beautiful and heartbreaking at the same time. Its filed with a strong piece of emotion, that keeps flowing all the way through the piece, such a short piece of work filled with so much meaning and emotion. I loved this like hoenestly thought it was fantastic

[Brianna Brie]

I love this! It is a great little piece.