Missing you HURTS!!

I don't miss ya...I miss the person I though you were...

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

MISSING YOU HURTS!!

( If even a day should go by when I don’t say "I Miss you"…may never a moment go by without you knowing that I do…)

 

When there was so much to say, and silence said it all…

And now I realize that life without you…

Is not fine at all…

My heart is disarray…

My mind is reeling with distraction…

My body feels for yours…

An irresistible attraction…

Each moment, every bit of mine…

Keep saying that…

Today isn’t really a big occasion…

And there is no particular reason to write but…

Without you, there is no music in my life…

No sunshine in my life, no joy in my soul…

Although we remain apart, it’s nice to know we are together in thoughts…

It seems you are always in my dreams…

You fill my walking hours…

Your presence and your promises…

Warm me with their magic powers…

Whenever we’re apart…

That sense of emptiness starts growing…

But when you’re close to me…

My world is filled to overflowing…

Iam lonesome without you….

As each and every moment…

Add your warm sunshine to my life…

By your charming presence once again….

Come back soon, for…Iam missing you…

Sometimes, when Iam alone…

I close my eyes and think of you…

And the thought of your love warms me inside and makes me smile…

And whenever we’ll meet….I’ll take you there…

Someday, somehow, somewhere….

I Miss you…I Miss you…I Miss you…

Oh!

And it hurts…

Missing you hurts…

 

 

Reviews

[Anshul Khandelwal]

Well said.. in a simple manner... but the depth of it makes me realizes how much it hurts to miss someone... But
it is those moments that make your love grow deeper and longer... Those fond memories of hers will never let you diverge... Keep up the good work and dun miss her so much :) I knw it hurts.

Excellent Write ..

[Golden]

When there was so much to say, and silence said it all�"

Beautiful write and I loved its flow the most.

[Blue Rose]

Missing a person who was/is close to your heart is really a hard thing to do..
Lucky is that girl ^_^

[Blackbeats]

If even a day should go by when I don't say "I Miss you"�may never a moment go by without you knowing that I do�

I liked this quote a lot, It somehow binds up the entire feel of the poem.
Nicely penned

[Innocent]

I liked it right from the starting.
Great write but yeah! don't miss her too much dude!


"When there was so much to say, and silence said it all�
And now I realize that life without you�
Is not fine at all�"

ahmmm!! damn good!

[RaindropsRoses93]

This poem made my heart ache in the best way possible. It was beautiful and heartfelt and made me think of the one I love with all my heart. I called him right after reading it so thanks so much for writing this. There are a couple errors where you put "Iam" instead of "I am" but I barley noticed through all the passion.

[Nicholas Hallows]

This is a beautiful piece. I really felt the emotions.

When there was so much to say, and silence said it all

I really like this.

NH

[Lia]

beautiful piece, greatly written, thanks xx

[Tyler King]

complete relation. of course. it's hard for someone not to feel like this about someone or something. Good job at capturing those moments.

[ah]

u should change and whenever we'll meet to whenever we meet....this is an awesome poem and expresses ur feelings greatly...keep it up great job