butterflies...

butterflies...

A Poem by frozensakura

Butterflies butterflies everywhere
close your eyes and turn three times
when you do you will see
all is there for you and me
time to play and time to dance
you just have to take a chance...

When time is done you will know
the chimes will ring and start to sing
just touch your toes and squeeze your nose
when your done repeat this verse
butterflies butterflies everywhere...

Be of haste
there's no time to waste
when you see a bell that starts to yell
this is how you know it is time to go and say goodbye
tomorrow is another day
there's time to play and time to dance
tomorrow you can take that chance
remember the chimes
remember the bell
for when you're there all is well

© 2013 frozensakura


Author's Note

frozensakura
haha don't ask... i get really bored at 3am...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

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This reminds me when I was in Elementary School. My 5th grade class raised butterflies (during that year they were my favorite animal because of this).
This reminds me of the lovely sense of innocence and freedom those butterflies gave me.
Thanks for writing this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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this is light verse to savour and enjoy. you have painted the lightest and most beautiful butterflies :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Has a tra-la-la to its beat and a carefree, fresh take on things. I can imagine a gal skipping and hopping down a field of daisies, without a care in the world. About time!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like it it is really good

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aha this is sweet, like a little fairytale opening c: Very good :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Butterflies, everywhere lol

I really liked this poem...It seems like a fun and playful poem...It's also a catchy one...I cna see the elementary kids singing something like this...But yes a very enjoyable poem to read, looking forward to some more

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love this image of butterflies that I have in my head now!
Such a fun and carefree poem.
Love it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So cute! Flows very nicely :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice flow and rhyme

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DO do do.im gonna go try that.lol
very cute poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was fun.. warm and cheerful :) Nice poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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frozensakura

Riverbank, CA



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