butterflies...

Butterflies butterflies everywhere
close your eyes and turn three times
when you do you will see
all is there for you and me
time to play and time to dance
you just have to take a chance...

When time is done you will know
the chimes will ring and start to sing
just touch your toes and squeeze your nose
when your done repeat this verse
butterflies butterflies everywhere...

Be of haste
there's no time to waste
when you see a bell that starts to yell
this is how you know it is time to go and say goodbye
tomorrow is another day
there's time to play and time to dance
tomorrow you can take that chance
remember the chimes
remember the bell
for when you're there all is well

Author's Note

haha don't ask... i get really bored at 3am...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

Reviews

[Calypso]

This reminds me when I was in Elementary School. My 5th grade class raised butterflies (during that year they were my favorite animal because of this).
This reminds me of the lovely sense of innocence and freedom those butterflies gave me.
Thanks for writing this.

[Uc Amalu Jr]

A great poem.

[Ysabel Reyes]

"just touch your toes and squeeze your nose
when your done repeat this verse
butterflies butterflies everywhere..."
my favorite lines!

this was a cute poem! we really need to change a little for once!

[Spookers]

It was different. I will give you that. I liked it. It sort of reminded me of a kindergarten nursery rhyme

[Dearantlers]

I loved it! It was really good. I think it's an interesting way that you put it, but like I said, it's really good! Thanks for the RR.

[Jupiter Jazz]

If it rhymed more I'd say it was a nursey rhyme or a children's book

[w2de35657u687y4324rf]

It could flow a little better. Perhaps try writing earlier in the day if you think your late night writes are so out of hand. xP Interesting way to put out a random fantasy.

[Call Me Blu]

I thik i reviewed this already....hrmm. GHoing through RR"s and I am confuzzled now. Anyway I will say what I said before I like the way the words sound, but the could flow a bit better. Other than that I loved it! Great job!

[Writing with Kae]

sounds like a nursery rhyme lol

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

So happy and cheerful!

[hmarieee]

i really liked this poem. beautiful!