butterflies...

butterflies...

A Poem by frozensakura

Butterflies butterflies everywhere
close your eyes and turn three times
when you do you will see
all is there for you and me
time to play and time to dance
you just have to take a chance...

When time is done you will know
the chimes will ring and start to sing
just touch your toes and squeeze your nose
when your done repeat this verse
butterflies butterflies everywhere...

Be of haste
there's no time to waste
when you see a bell that starts to yell
this is how you know it is time to go and say goodbye
tomorrow is another day
there's time to play and time to dance
tomorrow you can take that chance
remember the chimes
remember the bell
for when you're there all is well

© 2013 frozensakura


Author's Note

frozensakura
haha don't ask... i get really bored at 3am...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

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This reminds me when I was in Elementary School. My 5th grade class raised butterflies (during that year they were my favorite animal because of this).
This reminds me of the lovely sense of innocence and freedom those butterflies gave me.
Thanks for writing this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Dare I call it sweet? I really liked it. Nice flow, good imagery.
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Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute poem about butterflies. I love it. This sounds very beautiful. I love how you use gentle words for this poem. The word "magical" just comes to mind. Great write. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet poem, really enjoyed it!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is such a good poem, good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds kinda like an ABBA song ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

STAYED BORED AT 3 AM FOR YOUR MIND WORKS WONDERS AT THAT TIME AS ABOVE HAS PROVEN
TK

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thus the fae call to their kin. the call is loud and quite persistent at times, is it not?

it can be refined, smoothed, if you wish to, and some of the excess removed to reveal the wicked message within.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love the flow

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well written, i like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sorta strange...but I like it! Good job.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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