butterflies...

butterflies...

A Poem by frozensakura

Butterflies butterflies everywhere
close your eyes and turn three times
when you do you will see
all is there for you and me
time to play and time to dance
you just have to take a chance...

When time is done you will know
the chimes will ring and start to sing
just touch your toes and squeeze your nose
when your done repeat this verse
butterflies butterflies everywhere...

Be of haste
there's no time to waste
when you see a bell that starts to yell
this is how you know it is time to go and say goodbye
tomorrow is another day
there's time to play and time to dance
tomorrow you can take that chance
remember the chimes
remember the bell
for when you're there all is well

© 2013 frozensakura


Author's Note

frozensakura
haha don't ask... i get really bored at 3am...
~Nichole Marie Nehring<3

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This reminds me when I was in Elementary School. My 5th grade class raised butterflies (during that year they were my favorite animal because of this).
This reminds me of the lovely sense of innocence and freedom those butterflies gave me.
Thanks for writing this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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o_O like it,
just random..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Extremely broken, but the time of relevance is perfect, well done, good read

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The rhythm is a bit off (which is only my opinion) , but it's an adorable poem nonetheless.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this one also you have to live for today cause tomorrow wont be the same an keep living til the chimes ring

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A fun playful poem!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really enjoyed this it played well on my mind and made my heart feel free
great job done on this poem tho' one thought if you want perhaps you should extend
on the line, if, so, let us be as Hummingbirds and butterflies flapping
fast and full of haste
immersed in the music beating quick and sweet and yell out YEAH!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice write. it flowed vary well.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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haha its prettyyyyy :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I LIKE IT NICE FLOW

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like it, and it reminds me of my 3am poems xD They end up really weird xD Great work, keep writing :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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frozensakura

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