You plus/vs. Me

You plus/vs. Me

A Poem by Dark Butterfly
"

its just stuff i needed to get off my chest. so why nor make it a poem huh?

"

Who even are you?

Who am i?

 

I feel like i don't know either of us anymore.

three years ago, when we met, in fifth grade, we were just friends.

It became more than that.

 

i told you i liked you.

i got

rejected.

things went on

we were friends

it became more, again

you hugged me

and told me

you loved me

i had to leave before i could say anything at all

(stupid carline! HORRIBLE TIMING! I WOULDVE SAID I LOVED YOU BACK)

i said

in a text

"youll think ive gone crazy but did you say what i think you said"

and you said

in person

at school

"no, no i didn't

just dont think about that okay?"

QUITE SHEEPISHLY

 

thats means

you said what you said what i thought you said

because you knew what i thought you said

therefore you said it

 

guys should chase girls right?

not just run away like scarred little dogs

 

you really are a jerk

your always so sarcastic

i am too...

 

Would it hurt you to ever say anything nice to me??

would it ever hurt me to ever say anything nice to you??

 

fine

you have really nice eyes for a guy

 

 

 

i love you

i hate you

 

i....*sigh*

 

 

 

 

© 2012 Dark Butterfly


Author's Note

Dark Butterfly
hope someone understands this lol

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certainly understand. Unfortunately... ugh. Love! so complicated! I really hate it sometimes, but, well LOVE it others.

Posted 8 Years Ago


welcome to the double edged sword which is love.... i like this write, it is playful and youthful while, at the same time, truthful and brutally relevant to the pinings of young love. very nice indeed!

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is great!!!! The different font sized added so much to that poem itself! I didn't realize how much font size could affect writing. Guess you learn something new everyday :P I don't know if you meant this to be a bit humorous, but I found myself laughing throughout most of it. Sorry. It just reminded me so much of school and one of my friends. I've got to get her to read this ;P

AWESOME job :P :P :P

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dark Butterfly

8 Years Ago

lol thanks a ton!!!
wow. the different fonts an different sizes really drew me in. I understand this completely! You had a best friend, developed one way feelings for him, and things got complicated. This is wonderful poetry. I really like that you didn't use capitals. It adds something. And I reasly like the , " fine you have really nice eyes for a guy" the smaller print enunciates how grudgeingly that not so great compliment was given!! And with sass too!! :) This poem has so much voice and emotion... I'm really impressed. 100/100 ~Tunder~ p.s thanks for your reviews, they're much appreciated :) I look forward to reading more of your work when I have time! :) Keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dark Butterfly

8 Years Ago

wow, thanks so much!
its a true story

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Dark Butterfly
Dark Butterfly

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Im thirteen, ive been writing since i can remember but ive just recently gotten verry serious about my novels. I can be a really fun person to be around or a verry quiet, serious person. I work best b.. more..

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