Grey Day Whispers

cloudy mornings offer comfort
cosy like a shawl warms shoulders
while the regal swans are swimming
gone the minutes i grow older
let me saunter where I wish to
freedom is a precious gift

away from all the ties of living
here i breathe in fresh air crispness
drear the rippled surface misty
ghosts come calling drifting nearer
veils like trails that swirl and sashay
out they are to spook my day

leave me be i am not ready
mellow autumn yellow ochres
round the margins sit a necklace
on the edge of cold grey waters
little boats of many colours
fallen leaves from weary trees

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Dear Chris,

The clouds make us appreciate the sunshine even better. One is blessed to breathe in the fresh, free air. I loved the ethereal imagery used throughout the poem. And yes, we're not ready to join those loving ghosts, yet. There's so much more to accomplish yet. But its a comfort knowing they wait....I loved this poem.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Divya. The ghosts always call this time of year. A pre Christmas visit:) So pleased you enjoyed what you read. All the best.

Chris

[DIVYA]

I always enjoy your poetry so much. You're most welcome, my friend

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as we grow older there are those times when we forget we are....when something breathes new life into us...diverts our attention long enough to make us teenagers again...even if just for a moment.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

How wonderful when that happens. I like your thoughts here J. Thank you.

Chris

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

what a wonderful poem showing how nature is freedom

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Dale for your warm words. All the best.

Chris

[Matthew Kult]

Vividly imaged, excellently written

Lovely read

With love

Matthew

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Matthew for such an encouraging review.

Peace and love.

Chris

[Patricia Wedel]

The fallen colours as waves splash with interpolation...
every emotion goes out to Sea... as the breeze carries
the music to another shore... gently, Pat

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you dear Pat. The marina lakes are such an inspiration. Hope your weekend has been peaceful. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts.


Chris