Blessings

look into the open heart
of a camellia in full bloom

what do you see within
the strata of soft silk perfection

a loveliness like a chirping bird at dawn
the glory of a new spring morning

a warning that life is fleeting
and that all too soon too soon

the raindrop nested tween petals
of a fine full skirted red dress

will let out a sigh at the
inevitable downturn and demise

yet even in death the old paving
is blessed with its gentle petal fall

scattered crimson confetti
tinctured with a fringe of decay

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous work Chris. Great use of language and imagery.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Thomas. Have a great weekend.

Chris

[Ana Papaya]

A beautiful softness in your words brings a lovely peaceful feeling this morning.
Blessings indeed, nature's treasures. Lovely poetry from you, Chris.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you so much Ana for your kind words. Know you are appreciated. Have a lovely weekend.

Chris

[Pete]

words cannot do this delicate beauty justice. soulful just like the blessings bestowed.

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Pete, thank you for your encouraging review. Our camellia this year has been magnificent. It deserved a poem. Pleased you liked it. Have a happy Friday.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This reminds me of a Neil Diamond song..."Being done too soon"---
beautiful poem and yes, life is fleeting and many of us don't realize that enough.
We still don't appreciate what we have while we have it....enough.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you j. I listened to the Neil Diamond song. Very upbeat and yes it reminds us all of those famous names who have come and gone. Also Love reminder of the people we love and hold dearest and the fear of losing them. I am no stranger to death and the aftermath. I like your thoughts here dear j.

Chris