The Fire Within—An Original Urban Legend

The Fire Within—An Original Urban Legend

A Chapter by Steven Cash
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Another Urban Legend folk

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            In Alexandria, Virginia, on the corner of Temple and Market Street stands an antiquated storefront. It is a building dating back to the 1800s, as are most in that famed ‘Old Town’ area, but this one is the only one, on that block at least, with the distinction of being haunted.

            On a cold night in December 1882, when the storefront was Nelsons General Store, there was a particularly horrific event that went on. Albert Nelson and his family lived on the second floor above the store. It was just after midnight when Albert heard a noise in the store.

            He grabbed his riffle and prepared to head downstairs. Before doing so however, he told his wife and two sons to stay in the bedroom and lock the door.

            “Don’t come out,” he said, “No matter what you see or hear. I will let myself back in.”

            Albert headed down the stairs and into the store, where he found two hoodlums trying to get open the cash register.

            He shot once at the criminals, knocking over the gas lamp they held. Unfortunately, they shot back at Albert and killed him instantly. Even more tragic was the fact that the broken lamp grew a blaze that quickly engulfed the store.

            Upstairs, Mrs. Nelson and her sons waited, praying that Albert would return. He said he would come back.

            He never did.

            They never realized about the fire until they saw the smoke coming through the floorboards. As soon as they opened the doors too, the flames came into the room.

            They died shortly thereafter.

            It is said to this day by locals that anyone that visits that location, which is now a Wells Fargo Bank, could run into the ghosts of the Nelson family. While Mrs. Nelson and her sons are placid, Albert Nelson is said to be a vengeful spirit, seeking revenge on anyone who wants to cheat or steal from that place.

            The story was just folklore, or so assumed, until February 23, 2007 when a man came into that Wells Fargo Branch and attempted a robbery. He was quickly cornered by police, and tried to flee up the stairs to the second level�"which has since been converted into a vault among other things.

            When police arrived upstairs they found the would-be robber shot to death. But the coroner found the most unsettling details.

            One, he was shot to death with an 1800s rifle bullet.

            Two, his internal organs were charred and burned. The coroner said it was as if he were electrocuted.

            Or as if he’d died in a fire.

            People say the man met the same fate at the hands of Albert’s ghost. Seeing as Albert was first shot, then burned in the blaze

 



© 2012 Steven Cash


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Wow. When I read this my bedroom was pitch-black (I've got another killer headache) and I got chills! This is fantastic! :)
Ps tonight I'm gonna catch up on my read requests (21 to go) and pretty much all of them are from you so I may not comment on everything you requested but just know that I read them. I swear. :)
And unless something like the vision thing happens again, I will not ever get behind again!

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wow, this is so tragic. I feel so sorry for the family

Posted 11 Years Ago


Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Yep
That is one of the creepiest things i have ever read

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Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Lol glad it was
Brielle Cartny

11 Years Ago

Glad my nightmares will be nothing of impending doom when i go to sleep in an hour or so? If so no .. read more
A very articulate presentation for sure! I would like to see more short stories of the nature. Best piece I have read by you so far keep it up.

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Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

And I have plenty more. Just check my profile
Interesting story :) I love reading this kind of stuff..excellent job steven!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Thank you much!
You spelled rifle wrong in the third paragraph, but otherwise, nice job

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Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Aw, ok, thanks, Amanda!
Amanda

11 Years Ago

No problem :)
Very nice Steven, well written and thrilling. Amazing.

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11 Years Ago

Thanks
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CREEPY and SCARY! I would never go to that shop, 100/100 Loved it!

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You're welcome! :)
This is really interesting! I love stories like this, good write!

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Steven Cash

11 Years Ago

Thank you much!
K-mo

11 Years Ago

your most welcome!

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