New Message—Original Urban Legend

New Message—Original Urban Legend

A Chapter by Steven Cash
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'Nother one

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New Message, your phone reads.

You pick it up, and read the short scrawl from your boyfriend. It simply says, “Come into the living room, I have a surprise for you.”

            You smile, placing the book on the nightstand and climb out of bed. You can only imagine what the surprise must be. You glance at the clock, which reads 2:13am.

            “Rodger?” you call out as you descend the stairs. You see the glow from the TV spilling out into the hallway, from the living room. You begin to turn towards the living room, but then you hear Rodger’s voice from the kitchen.

            “Babe, I am in here!” he calls. You, with a frown, go into the kitchen and see him making a sandwich and grabbing a beer. As he passes by you, he kisses you on the forehead and asks what you want.

            “Me?” you ask, dumbstruck, “You are the one who sent the text!”

            “What text?” he asks. You follow him into the living room as he takes a seat and is quickly taken up into the sports highlights.

            “Rodger, you just sent me a text from your phone saying come into the living room for a surprise.”

            He looks at you, half in shock and half in laughter. “Are you sure? I haven’t had my phone since I went to the kitchen, and that was 10 minutes ago.

            You look at the couch. “Where is it?”

            “Right here,” he says.

            But the ‘he’ is not Rodger.

            It’s the man in the corner who holds a cell phone in one hand, and an ax in the other.



© 2012 Steven Cash


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Steven Cash
Was that creepy or what? :)

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Disturbing, a clift hanger, makes me want to read more!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

Thanks
 Soul Fire

12 Years Ago

You're welcome
WOW!! This is so creepy it gave me chills at the end imagining what it would be like in this situation. You have a very creative mind when it comes to these kinds of stories. Keep it up, I love them!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Brian
I like all your stories! They're really creepy but I love it :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
very creepy i shall say lol

Posted 12 Years Ago


Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

thanks girl
sierrasparks91

12 Years Ago

your welcome
This is different... I've never read something from this perspective... feels like tales from the dark side, very cryptic. Original in creativity, very refreshing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

Thanks
this was perfect. loved it! the ending is priceless...

Posted 12 Years Ago


Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

lol ahaa thanks
love the ending ....great write

Posted 12 Years Ago


Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

Thanks Afra
Unexpected ending, I thought it was going to be an alien or something supernatural lol

Nice job, as usual :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

LOL alien? ahaa

thanks Amanda
Amanda

12 Years Ago

well idk you're a creative person haha
Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

I do need to do an alien Urban Legend................. maybe today
You can't just end it!!!!! Noooooo. lol keep going! This was great! Well done!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

Thanks lol
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This was much more than CREEPY! Great horror write again! 100/100 Loved it!

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Steven Cash

12 Years Ago

Thanks much Kat!
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12 Years Ago

You're welcome! :)

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