The Blonde Girl

A magnificently beautiful story ... Some might say that it was sad to read, and did not have a happy ending ... But I say, this story is perfect in that perfect timing of two people meeting, clueless that they would ever meet, who needed someone special in their lives at that precise moment in time. She gave you something no one else ever could have, and you gave her more than you will ever know, even though you do know ... This story is tender and touching to the very core of any heart that has ever had a first crush or first love, especially someone as special as I see that she was to you ... And you to her ... A wonderful memorial to her memory in keeping her memory alive ... Thank you for sharing ... Very well written ...

Posted 9 Years Ago

This was beautiful in its subtlety. Not many people can write about childhood with depth... Most childhood stories are too trivial; they tend to undermine the complex feelings present (yes) even in childhood. I was glad to see that is not the case here. I felt real affection for Sara and Chase by the end...

Posted 9 Years Ago

A sad story shared. You create situation, friendship and sadness. Thank you for sharing the powerful story.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago

Oh my god. This is so sweet and sad which makes it almost perfect.
There were one or two grammatical errors in between but that could not have taken away from the beauty of what you wrote of. I'm keeping this one. Its one of the best that I've read so far. Thanks for referring me to it.

Posted 9 Years Ago

You've captured the pain of this character extremely well, a good use of imagery used. I really felt the hardship of this character.

Posted 9 Years Ago

That was a very very moving story that broke my heart to bits.

Posted 9 Years Ago

it's really heart -rending and for the reason that it's true it just tears my heart apart.... intense emotion.. i loved it nd at the same time i feel sorry!

Posted 9 Years Ago

This one is absolutely fantastic... You have left me speechless... This story is quite emotional.. I usually don't read stories ( too busy with work).. but I am glad you asked me to read this... loved it... May your friend's soul rest in peace.

Posted 9 Years Ago

This story gave me chills. Beautiful written, very emotional. I am absolutely spechless...

Posted 9 Years Ago

Ah that's beautiful. It's like she was your (I assume it's you in the story) guardian angel. She looked beautiful and was sent down to earth to meet you at a low point in your life. To save you and to comfort you for many years. Until you were strong enough to go alone and god called her back to heaven because her job was done. This is a really powerful story and I'm glad you shared it. Only some of us get to meet our guardian angels ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago

That brought the tears, really. That was really good. It's amazing how a sick person can change someone's life completely.

Posted 9 Years Ago