The Blonde Girl

A magnificently beautiful story ... Some might say that it was sad to read, and did not have a happy ending ... But I say, this story is perfect in that perfect timing of two people meeting, clueless that they would ever meet, who needed someone special in their lives at that precise moment in time. She gave you something no one else ever could have, and you gave her more than you will ever know, even though you do know ... This story is tender and touching to the very core of any heart that has ever had a first crush or first love, especially someone as special as I see that she was to you ... And you to her ... A wonderful memorial to her memory in keeping her memory alive ... Thank you for sharing ... Very well written ...

Posted 9 Years Ago

When I first read this I was so overcome that I couldn't leave a comment on this wonderfully bittersweet piece. It is so tender and beautiful! I still can't really describe everything it made me feel. Just wonderful!

Posted 8 Years Ago

What a beautiful heartfelt story. This is a wonderful tribute, a great way of remembering The Blonde Girl. You have immortalized the memory of her in your words. May her soul rest in peace. I love how simple this story is, literarily speaking. It makes it more special. I like that you remember her with happiness and give her credit for making you the person that you are today. You cherish her memory and for that I truly respect you. I hope you know what a great source of comfort and strength you were for her throughout her illness. I am sure that she was grateful for you.

Thank you for sharing your story. I wish you truckloads of happiness. Keep writing. X

Posted 8 Years Ago

I came across this whilst reading .Mouse,' by a writer called Terpsichore, (your story was a related subject.) and I'm so glad I found it.

Your story is indeed one of sadness and loss. But it is so beautifuly and sensitively portrayed, that I was left with an overwhelming sense that ultimately the precious memory of that little blonde girl became so much more than the loss; and memories of course, last forever.

So very well written.

Beccy.

Posted 8 Years Ago

a really magnificently beautiful story, Some people might say that it was sad to read, and It did not have a happy ending but I thought it was really good I like.

Posted 8 Years Ago

Very well written! Wonderful memorial to her memory!

Posted 8 Years Ago

sad but i think it's a great tribute for your friend.

Posted 8 Years Ago

A very lovely written story,, I have one these Ladies of my life that this touches nicely done... ciao LL

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is a beautiful story that pushed me to tears. Indeed this is a story that deserves to be heard. Cancer is such a nasty thing that claims many people too early. She is still affecting your life to this day, and that may have been her purpose in your life. By being your best friend and the first girl you've ever loved, it taught you many things that most people don't understand at that age.
I really enjoyed this, it is a great touching story. And your execution of the story was spot on because it gave a sweet innocence to the whole piece. Overall great work :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

This broke my heart!
Simple but splendid piece!
Filled with reminisce of innocence.
Great write!

Posted 8 Years Ago

This story is so.. i'm speechless. I love the simplicity of this piece. Usually, when a block of writing is very descriptive and flowery, it clouds the emotional depth of the piece. Though this.. this piece is so heartfelt! My heart skipped a beat when Chase interpreted cancer as "and she has lancer". I'm still speechless!

Posted 8 Years Ago