Speak up

Isn't life challenging

That hatred in your mind

When people scream at you

When everybody's pointing you out

The clouds from which you see

Start filling slowly

And you don't speak up like it's a crime

And when its time the clouds have to burst

When the room is locked

And you are inside

You help the clouds burst and ruin your mascara and at the same time you clean them 

And a handkerchief in your hand

What ever you do you always end up crying.

Reviews

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Sad experience of life what can make us cry. I wish this vanish on forver. Well done

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[...]

Me too thanks lot

[hanir]

Nice flow of emotions. Nice write.

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[Indra Neil]

a profound write! well done! :)

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[Indra Neil]

u r welcome! :)

[XenWratH]

Love it! I really can relate so much to the way you write..

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[Emma]

Very true! But thankfully the storm always blows over.

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[Bear]

For English not being your native language your understanding and use of words is very good. I can relate to this poem (well all but the mascara) I am looking forward to reading more of your poetry, thanks for posting so we can enjoy your work :~)

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes I agree with your words, sometimes life hits you really hard. But my friend the time always changes remember! You wrote beautifully...

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot :)

[Sami Khalil]

So true and well articulated. A poem of truth and relevance. Excellent. ....:)..........

[Urja Gokani]

thanks a lot

[Sami Khalil]

Welcome a lot......^).........