Ends Now

Stop,
I don't want to be with you.

Never,
I am not going to love you.

No,
this is real.

Trust,
trust me I don't love you.

Hate you,
I hate you.

Ends,
speech finished,
now.

Author's Note

This is something VERY new to me, and I dont know do it work out well, so please really tell me what do you think.

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Good write

[Loner]

*Smiles * i love it when you experiment with your work ..... its like playing with your poem all the way ...... loved it as always !

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

I find it somewhat strange..!!!!!!

[astoundinglyattractive]

mmmmmmmm... this one is really good, even better than the other ones i've read. it is extremely craftfully written.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Love it! It's a good way to tell off a ex!

[Kimberly]

Interesting style. I think the meaning is good and strong which is reflected in the sharp, clipping style of the poem. I think if you're going to use this style this is the type of poem that fits it.

[AloysiaVerben]

I love it. It sounds like the person is in denial. Sometimes we get sick of things and try and find a fireexit. Good work :)

[Drako]

i like this. it was right to the point. nice way of shutting someone down

[Marie Harrison]

I love it! Sometimes we just want out immediately. We reach our limit and that's it!