A Kiss

Slowly in the mist,
you held my hands,
looking in my eyes,
fill with love,
as you whispered,
into my ears,
soft and low,
'I love you'.

You put your arms,
around me,
and slowly bent down,
to give me,
a perfect kiss...

Author's Note

What do you think? This is only an imagination of me how a kiss should be, and I haven't even go through anything a like,so this may be no real, well, but....

Reviews

[Rain Kissed Secret]

It's adorable. If I were you I'd try and expand on it, the more detail that's given the more real that is, and it'll be a hooker for a lot of people if you envelope them in that scene

[Awkward]

Short, Sweet, and Romantic. Good job!

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really sweet and romantic!

[.]

ahhh..sweet heaven!

[Coyote Poetry]

I remember those sweet kisses from the past. A kiss is a promise of love and kindness. I like the story in your words also. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Kelly M.]

Aww! So sweet and lovely. 28 reviews! Oh my! A lot of people seem to like this a lot! Same with me! :)

[Sleeping Maiden]

Awww, pretty romantic actually. ^-^ I like it! simple but shows the love here. =D

[Short.Nerd]

So sweet. Nice job!

[Julie Beth]

this is so sweet great job :)

[Linear]

A romantic kiss in the mist, just perfect :O)