Blessed In Your World

  

It is so plain to see

Even from an Eagle’s eye view

Just how lovely

The picturesque view of you is,

With well chiseled curves

And a face that even

Angel’s sing in praise.

 

More then that is the beauty I see

When I get the privilege

To enter your world

 

And walk…

 

Through your mind and

See your wondrous thoughts

All around,

Capturing my imaginations

With thought so independent and sweet.

Plus showing me enlightening ways

That humanity still exists.

 

Then to enter…

 

The temple of your soul

To experience deeply eternal faith

That brings me to my knees

To pray for the opportunity

Of seeing such extraordinary beliefs.

 

Finally roaming…

 

The landscape of your heart

Where I see so many

Seeds of love thriving in

Nutrient rich soil of compassion

Creating beautiful flowers

Of family, friends and loved ones

Living and growing

In peace and harmony

As far as the eye can see.

 

Every time I enter that world I count my blessings

For the experience and am convinced

I come out a better man every time.

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Bravo.. so moving and deep! Loved the flow of the words coming from your soul.. pouring out for this person whom is clearly adored on many levels of their beauty.. spiritually, physically, mentally.. this is really profound if it's real! You even state you come out a better man every time you enter their world.. considering it a blessing! This feels real.. like raw emotions coming from a heart.. thank you so much for sharing!!! =)

[Magdelena]

Oh my! Cowboy when you want, you can charm the birds down to sit at your feet! This was pure heaven.. I so loved your imagery. It brought me along with you, I felt the words, seeing them in my minds eye and oh ythe softness they left behind,. What a wonder it can be, this love....

Mag xx

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

you are a romantic hero! love your style x0x0x0x and your smile! x0x0x

[Lizanne]

A beautiful writing. The inspiration you received for it must have been a very illuminating experience. Once in a while you read something that takes your breath away and this piece certainly does. Again you live up to the reputation that you had so steadily developed,as a very creative writer. "And walk...through your mind"...
"The temple of your soul...To experience deeply eternal faith....That brings me to my knees."
You could call this a poetic statement of deeply emotional admiration. Hold tightly to that endearing poetic pen that you wield so deftly.

[ABitBrokenPoetry]

"And a face that even Angel's sing in praise" i love these lines. this is a breathtaking poem. from your descriptions to this persons outer beauty, to 'temple of her soul'. so eloquently spoken. i think the most beautiful people are always the ones whose beauty shines from within. a beautiful romantic piece.

[Fran Marie]

Creating beautiful flowers

Of family, friends and loved ones

Living and growing

In peace and harmony


A most beautiful flowing piece of love and unity of friends and family
sprinkled in delightful metaphors to decribe such loveliness
as always beautifully penned!!

[Lightfalls]

This is a beautiful analogy. There is lots of depth and feeling in it...a great write.

[Lauren Beth]

This is truly a lovely piece...emotions of love and adoration expressed so beautifully! I love the beginning lines "The temple of your soul..." and "The landscape of your heart..." Amazing write Dale!

[An owl on the moon]

There is so much life and love beautifully expressed through your writing here. It is alive with metaphors and magic. Excellent, tender, and passionate write.

[Stacey Watts]

Wow I got lost in this piece and when I got to the end I felt calm. You did an excellent job with this one. The imagery and the flow was just unique. It was about love without the usual appreciation. It was on so much of a deeper level. Beautifully written.