Limerick-2

Limerick-2

A Poem by Devanshu Rajput
"

In my effort to make you laugh

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© 2013 Devanshu Rajput


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I could see this with a goofy Dr. Seuessian picture attached to it. If you mean the animal deer, it is spelled 'deer' not 'dear'. If not, then I can offer no aid. : ) Light-hearted and simple!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks for letting me know my fault.

I really appreciate it.

Thanks for re.. read more
A slight perfection hugs this piece.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks.

Always love to read your reviews
Not sure what the first line means? And it would work better if the last word of the first line rhymed with the last word of the last line - obviously gear and bear don't - which for me personally made it dis-jointed. I loved the middle three lines though and the general idea. A bit of tinkering and this could easily be a top notch little limerick.
Thank you for this - it has inspired me to have a go at a limerick now! Good fun!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

You took me to right point.

Really these words didn't rhyme.

As per Your a.. read more
Like this ! funny and well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks.

With best wishes,

Devanshu
XD Nicely done. :) I love limericks!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

I too love limericks that's why I write them.

Thanks.

Devanshu
Better do something about that goddamn bear

Posted 8 Years Ago


Absolutely implausibly hysterical humor! :) BTW, I'm with Roopal; why are the other animals so less in number?! O_o

Posted 8 Years Ago


Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks.

I will take a look soon.

Always love to read reviews by you.
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Haha this made me smile :) Nice one :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


"His hair sadly caused him fear" hehehe.. poor fellow. :D
You can add a few more lines, but still, it made me smile. But all I keep wandering, why 100 giraffes when other animals are so less in number?

A true limerick. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Devanshu Rajput

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your words.

I haven't added more lines because Limerick ideally does not all.. read more

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Added on June 23, 2013
Last Updated on June 25, 2013
Tags: Limerick, humor

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Devanshu Rajput
Devanshu Rajput

India



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