I AM VAMPIRE

They Call me a mystical creature of the night…

My powers are absolute…

I can bend you to my will….

I can purge your life force with my thoughts….

You are mine….

Your body belongs to me….

I will satisfy my blood lust….

Love you with unbidden passion…..

I am vampire….

And you are my only hope for salvation…..

 

Reviews

[Natalie C]

Brilliantly dark. Just loving the way you captured my mind with your unique format and excellent dark imagery.

Just loved

And you are my only hope for salvation...

Great line, very well thought out to bring this whole piece together so perfectly.
Loved reading this, thanks for sharing!

[After Midnight]

Ah, I love Lestat.

[DonGilbert]

yes... very lovely

[Vampstyle]

I love your vampire poems.

[E. J. Gette]

Oh wonderful. I too am drawn to vampires for some reason. This piece describes their need well. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Write on!

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

I totally love this!!!! Awesome poem about vampires, great job!!!

Heather

[Silas "vampiro&quo..]

you just summed up vampires in a short and deathly sweet poem.

-Vampiro

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Not bad, good idea. but honesty it could be written a little better. I give all my reviews like this, I don't mean to upset you. I just want you to know my honest opinion about what I think about your writing.

[Britt]

Loved it. Im like you love the dark side of things, fantasy creatures. Wonderful!

[Brette Medb]

I like this one because it's not overly drawn out or anything and it has great imagery. Really great job!

[Erotic Goddess]

Short and so specific. Your topic, one so many adore, I love it. Perfection in such short verse.

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