Five5

Five5

A Chapter by The old me

You hate me for not supporting your crappy life decisions. You hate me for not being there to talk about the same old terrible life choices. You accuse me of not caring anymore, and when I do make an effort to save our friendship, you couldn’t care less. It pretty sad you ruin this friendship because of some girl who didn’t want to be with you. I tried to help you but you allowed yourself to drown. It’s even sadder that no matter what I’ll be here waiting to pick up the pieces of this wreck.



© 2011 The old me


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I think that you are very strong for putting these on here. And as a psychology student, I find that it was good for you to get these out. As a writer, I don't think I have a right to judge the style or way it has been written because it is so emotionally raw and within that comes the beauty. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago



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The old me
The old me

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