weatherman

weatherman

 

 

forecast gray skies

but live blue demeanor

a somnambulist in sunshine dream

 

always waking to the rain

on the roof of his teardrop heart.

 

 

erin-cilberto

5/24/2018 

Reviews

[emmajoy]

You must be a weatherman, you've a way of washing away dark clouds.. ' Teardrop hearts hurt too, you know.. ' Wonderful phrase: ' a somnambulist in sunshine dream '

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, em...sometimes i see we are kindred spirits---

[emmajoy]

methinks you could be correct.. :)

must ry to sleep now 03.19 !!

[Jimmy Yetts]

Poetry, lovely and pure.
There are also, of course, the ever=present and most excellent metaphors!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Jimmy.
j.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love the last two lines beautiful great poem Jacob

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Julie.
j.