casual orange

casual orange

 

 

in maple logic

the veins of the surprised leaf

repel winter's suit

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

8/2/19

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Brevity at its best sir Jacob. Enjoyed every line.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir.

[Fran Marie]

I sense the gentle sensation of autumn's warmth within these lines staving off winters frosted arrival ...nice work.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Fran,
j.

[m3lody mae]

so very nicely written, quite enjoyed this

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you!
j.

[m3lody mae]

not a problem :)

[Ana B.]

Your works are true magic Jacob. An incredible amount of beauty in just 12 words.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Ana,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

This is a puzzler for me Jacob and I am sure it is multi layered and not just about nature. Perhaps this is something more to do with enjoying some warmth, orange is a warm colour and pushing the chill of winter away which always comes before we are ready. Could apply to people as well as nature.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

interesting...i like what you saw...thank you, Chris,
j.

[andrew mitchell]

Autumn tones in this fine write.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, andrew,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

"casual orange





in maple logic

the veins of the surprised leaf

repel winter's suit"