the rain's expectation

the rain's expectation

 

 

 

a drop of purpose

from your eye

 

to my cheek

and an acceptance

from my eye

 

gazing with love

into your heart.

 

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/9/19

Reviews

[Apollos]

I feel this pairs well with Fog with us contemplating the liquid elements. Lol
While mine has a focus on forgiveness your’s could be seen as having fruits birthed from what reconciliation of a relationship could look like.

No greater feeling than that look of acceptance in someone’s eye!

Fellow Romantics unite! Lol

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Apollos...and yes, they could be sibling poems...
j.

[Cassie]

And again, I am left with no words to review this.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Cassie,
j.

[light and ashes]

There is a certain comfort and intimacy in these words..... nicely done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, angel.
j.

[light and ashes]

You're welcome :)

[Lily Finch]

Awwwwww so romantic piece ... Love it...... 😍

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lily,
j.

[kentuck14]

The nurturing rain of human attraction, the chemistry of the heart preparing the field of love unto harvest.
T

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, T.
j.

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

Two rivers merge in an ocean of love. Beautiful!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Linda,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

A very tender moment. What an impact a tear can have when it is genuine. Such emotion in this little piece of brevity. Could see it being played out. Just lovely.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Chris,
j.

[Emaan Zahra Ijaz]

It's beautiful to think about how short sentences can be so touching. I still have a lot to learn it seems haha!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Emaan,
j.

[barleygirl]

Not having had any tender moments in my entire life (or so it seems), I'm reminded of my mom's romantic surprise when in her 80's/90's (after two abusive hubbies for 40+ years). Her 3rd hubby (married when they were both in mid-80's) -- he was finally the guy who held her when she cried instead of ridiculing her for crying. That's a reasonable standard! Love your simple measure of meaningfulness (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this proves it is never too late to find that soul mate....
thank you for sharing this very positive story of love on the almost fossiled rocks.
j.

[Sami Khalil]

Expectations can turn from droplets to a nectar of pleasure, of fulfillment. The ending is marvelous in that gazing with love, you blaze with passion. Marvelous sir Jacob.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, Sami,
j.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome sir Jacob.