Looking Up

Looking Up

 

 

cloudy,

with a chance of you

raining sunshine

upon my heart

 

 

erin-cilberto

11/21/19

Reviews

[h d e rushin]

so many soulful undertones here Jacob. Even operatic in it's Allegro order. First cloudy, then rain, then you..I've been here what, 5 years and still I haven't mastered this format Great poem....dana

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind review, dana,
j.

[R.E. Ray]

Looking up and perhaps through the season’s gray clouds to feel that sunshine. Seems we’re pretty good at forecasting “weather” like this, unlike those on TV. The heart seems good at predicting such things. Good write, J.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, R.E.
j.

[kentuck14]

It's nice when "things are looking up!" Nice and precise!
T

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, T.
j.

[M.]

So sweet and almost childlike, innocent. I hope they deserve you!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, M.
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

I have to agree with Fran, raining sunshine..
What a heartfelt expression. A lovely calling card.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Cherrie.
j.

[Christoph]

Kind of a roller coaster in 13 words.

That said, all you had to do was ask. I'm booking the flight.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

okay, thank you, confirm my reservation please!

:))))

j.

[Fran Marie]

raining sunshine what a lovely thought within this brief .cleverly written piece

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Fran,
j.

[DIVYA]

I love the play of words. Rain opposes sun usually, yet here it offsets it beautifully. Sunshine is beautiful indeed, after days of clouds.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your very kind words, DIVYA,
j.

[Chris Shaw]

This is such a heart warming little piece of brevity. What a difference a ray of hope can give on a cloudy day. Certainly puts a different perspective on many things, relationships included.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your words, Chris,
j.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Things are looking up!
A lovely hope and sweet message.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, i know...kind of simple...but i was just feeling it...thank you for liking it, Jimmy.
j.