short

short

 

 

 

dynamite arrival

I am in pieces

over your smile

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

2/13/22

Reviews

[Lisasview]

So so funny... great name too
Lisa

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Lisa,
j.

[Lisasview]

You are so welcome Hacib..

[Lisasview]

On my phone sorry Jacob..

[JE Falcon]

LOL, and so clever, Jacob! Short and funny. --- At first, I thought it was a Senryu, surprised again. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, JE,
j.

[John the Baptist]

This one appears to be about love found rather than the opposite. Let me note this date.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha, a rarity, eh?
Thank you, John,
j.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

They stuck an ad for a sports bra in your reviews. It's clear to me they are not concerned about smiles. Or maybe they did it for smiles. I expected to see an ad for shorts. Anyway, this was short and sweet.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha, thanks Fabian,
j.

[light and ashes]

So sweet, absolutely loved.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, light,
j.

[light and ashes]

You are very welcome.

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

A great metaphor
In pieces over your smile
Love this
Hope you are well

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Julie,
j.

[Dave]

So, so true! A smile, what could be worth more? What could inspire us more? Delighted, Jacob.

Take care - Dave

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Dave,
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Delightful 😊 the power of a smile.
In a day and age where we hide behind a mask the simple smile is like a b12 shot

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, it is...thank you, Cherrie,
j.

[Unspoken poet]

Love this, such a lovely write

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you, Unspoken,
j.

[M. J. Smith]

Well, that's you all over! 😆
Whirlwind romances, chance meetings, better be well anchored or you'll be blown away! Nicely done.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

ha ha, thanks, M.J.

j.