the days of daze

the days of daze

 

 

Judy crush

her desk

a note in class away from mine

her smile

a note in a song I imagined

 

her beauty

a memory

from a distance

a note in class away from mine

 

she almost knew I loved her.

 

 

erin-cilberto

7/15/23

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Dear J. I adore the cuteness of this memory. She knew my friend. She knew. You have flown a long way back in time with this one.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I did have one roller skate, couples skate with her once in 8th grade. Good memory.
thank you, Chris,
j.

[Fran Marie]

What a sweet memory and she almost
knew I loved her ..I reckon she knew
Jacob..girls are like that ..yeah they are..

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I never got the chance to tell her...we had a grade school reunion...I would have told her then and we would have had a good laugh over it...but she died of cancer a few months before that happened.
j.

[Stella Armour]

Did you carve her initials into your desk top Jacob ?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I thought about it...I thought about it....

[willweb]

I remember those days. Writing her name on a page in a notebook that she never saw. Nice one.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"those were the days, my friend, I thought they'd never end"---