Senryu # 700

Senryu # 700

 

 

 

in quiet confines

I drift with my inner thoughts

as a raft afloat

 

 

 

erin-cilberto

1/12/24

Reviews

[Stu. T.H.]

Even if there is no land to look for, the raft remains afloat, steady, as it has been for an indefinite time, undisturbed and unbending. That's the image I pictured mentally. Thank you for sharing your work, author Jacob Erin-Cilberto. I wish you a nice day.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

thank you for your kind words, Stu,
j.

[Desert Knave]

I like it. I love to just "float" along letting any and all prompts kick me into poetic gear. ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Jim...the current is absent for me right now...but reading here always inspires.
j.

[Cherrie Palmer]

being adrift is such a peaceful state of being.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, Cherrie,
j.

[Ken Simm.]

Pure peace in words. That is what I got.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, peace....and thank you, Ken.
j.

[Arundass TP]

A meaningful in-depth poem. Loved it 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you, my friend.
j.

[Chris Shaw]

Drifting with inner thoughts imagining you are afloat on water is a nice way to relax. Water and quiet can be so calming for a mind that is too busy. Lovely brevity. We all need to find that quiet, peaceful place.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Thank you for your words, Chris,
j.

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Jacob... afloat on the Waves where we reminisce about the Courage
that it took to cross the Channels that changed our Dreams... still waiting to come True. gently, Pat

[jacob erin-cilberto]

absolutely, Pat.
thank you so much for your words,
j.